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My Perfect Dawn . . . Ben

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 02:28:18 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry





I

can feel you

in my soul

i love it when your

there,

i hear the whisper of your voice

I'd know it anywhere.


Telling me

you love me and that we'll never part,

i can hear you gentle footsteps

at the doorway of my

heart.


I see you in your garden

amidst the flowers

wild,

nurturing a lovely rose as though it were a

child.


I

can feel you in my dreams

and in my wishes

to,

everything that my heart feel's

is all because of

you.


Your love

is but the perfect song

your kiss is poetry,

your touches are like gentle notes

in a mozart

symphony.


I

can feel you in my soul

with out the slightest touch,

for i have kissed you with my heart

i love you just that

much.


Your love

has brought me places

few men

have ever gone,

they've only seen the sunrise

i've seen my perfect

dawn.



Ben




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Re: My Perfect Dawn . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 02:55:19 AM AEST
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This is love. You have captured it so well in this write, and in your life, dear brother. I wish your son the best. To be in love is wonderful, yes it has it's ups and downs, but the up times are worth all the downs. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of poetry.
Much peace,
Your sis...Laura


Re: My Perfect Dawn . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 03:51:26 AM AEST
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Another masterpiece is written..You write the best love poems..Very good...
Much love & blessings to you and your.

C.S


Re: My Perfect Dawn . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by ham323 on Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 07:35:44 AM AEST
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Awww. That was the shiznit.
I read that to my friend and she said "wow, that's so.. gay."
But my excuse for her is her personality is built upon sarcasm.
Personally I found it sweet and wish I had a talent for writing romantic poetry such as this.
But.. I guess you could say mind DOES sound gay.
Blah, oh well yours is lovely.
Keep pimpin'.


Re: My Perfect Dawn . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 11:42:23 AM AEST
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Got the images of a man sitting on a front porch watching his wife, hang clothes in the sunset while he smiles and dreams of no one else, except HIS love and the LOVE they share........BEAUTY........always such beauty in the words you put on anything.......


Hugs your daughter

Brew~


Re: My Perfect Dawn . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 12:26:53 PM AEST
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Dear, dear friend,
yo way to go ben.
You should be writing for Halmark!
This write just is the icing on the cake today.
I find this sortta kindda how I feel while playing in the dirt.
Again, I say for the umptenth time, You show me that there are still good men on this planet!
Till Mr. right gets here I'll be happy playing in the dirt. My plants are happy too 'cause they are growing and feeding me, some now. The others are popping out all greens. I've Been eating turnip greens awhile.
This is the best one of your writes, ever!
No one can read this without beaming luv lites to all.
A masterpeice off all masterpeices.
Huggs, big smiles,
emy


Re: My Perfect Dawn . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 02:19:01 AM AEST
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So joyful and lovely to read!
Many congratulations to your son and daughter-in-law.
It is wonderful to see love as it blossoms through the generations.

Take care,
Dom


Re: My Perfect Dawn . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Nenny on Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 03:12:38 AM AEST
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What a great poem!!! I love it so much..you have captured all the right words to describe love...Love is so many things and when writing sometimes it's hard to find the words that you want to say..but you said it all..great job!!


Re: My Perfect Dawn . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 06:42:08 AM AEST
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ahhhh I can tell that you are truly blessed!!!
Wonderful piece!


Re: My Perfect Dawn . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 09:05:39 AM AEST
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you have put into words the true feelings of love and devotion once again.. so beautifully written.. so deep so powerful.. beautiful job

vampyress Jenni


Re: My Perfect Dawn . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 03:30:58 PM AEST
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Another moment of love flowing from that heart. The heart of the poet is truly the ability to love and you are blessed with that ability. A great piece that falls from a truly open heart.


Re: My Perfect Dawn . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 12:48:09 AM AEST
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truelove is rare, im so happy you live with it everyday, you'll never know how special to me your poetry is, just knowing two people are so deeply joined in soul...beautiful:)

love n' hugs nessa

roses




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