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Array ( [sid] => 134543 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The decision ''Love or Lust'' [time] => 2007-05-20 22:59:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I don't really understand
--WHY?
I'm the one who is changing
when I never really wanted to.
But i guess everything always is.
Giving into the world's high demands.
I thought we were perfect,
you and I.
we, the same soul of,
"the unchanging child"
lovin' life, givin' the world hell
the way it was supposed to be.
But like the spider to the fly,
adulthood caught me
and now i'm trapped.
between my emotions and loss of control.
Of what i want and what is best for me.
who else but I can really tell me?
--WE ALWAYS HAVE FUN-- don't we?
But life isn't all about fun is it?
Sure, it's a part of it.
but there is so much more,
I have so much to give.
I wish i could give it all
but I hold myself back,
because I want to be the child
you see me as.
Why don't you grow up with me?
--Peter Pan?
I don't know if you are capable of it.
You are amazing,
and I will never forget you.
but I have to change,
I am changing,
we are all everchanging,
until the day we die.
--Except You.
you will always be the way,
--I know you.
the way I love you.

i'm sorry how these things turned out.
--I love you
and i always will,
--My Friend.

i will never live without you
or hope i never have to...

i wish i could give you everything
You dream of...

I'm Sorry [comments] => 1 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 22 [informant] => xxdeathxTOxkristixx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The decision ''Love or Lust''

Contributed by xxdeathxTOxkristixx on Sunday, 20th May 2007 @ 10:59:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I don't really understand
--WHY?
I'm the one who is changing
when I never really wanted to.
But i guess everything always is.
Giving into the world's high demands.
I thought we were perfect,
you and I.
we, the same soul of,
"the unchanging child"
lovin' life, givin' the world hell
the way it was supposed to be.
But like the spider to the fly,
adulthood caught me
and now i'm trapped.
between my emotions and loss of control.
Of what i want and what is best for me.
who else but I can really tell me?
--WE ALWAYS HAVE FUN-- don't we?
But life isn't all about fun is it?
Sure, it's a part of it.
but there is so much more,
I have so much to give.
I wish i could give it all
but I hold myself back,
because I want to be the child
you see me as.
Why don't you grow up with me?
--Peter Pan?
I don't know if you are capable of it.
You are amazing,
and I will never forget you.
but I have to change,
I am changing,
we are all everchanging,
until the day we die.
--Except You.
you will always be the way,
--I know you.
the way I love you.

i'm sorry how these things turned out.
--I love you
and i always will,
--My Friend.

i will never live without you
or hope i never have to...

i wish i could give you everything
You dream of...

I'm Sorry

Copyright © xxdeathxTOxkristixx ... [ 2007-05-20 22:59:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The decision ''Love or Lust'' (User Rating: 1 )
by Juggalette_chick666pk on Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 01:07:12 PM AEST
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:( Hang in there. Great write. Just know you can try to give so much, but if you give toomuch you'll break. Keep your head high. Keep writing.

Victoria

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