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Array ( [sid] => 134540 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No Sorrow [time] => 2007-05-20 17:53:33 [hometext] => This poem is about how we can hurt the things we love. [bodytext] => If sorrow was a star
I would consume it alive
And leave it to die
And I would not cry

If sorrow was the moon
I would lick its shine
And swallow it inside
And I would not mind

If sorrow was the sea
I would drink it all
And smile in delight
And my happiness I would not hide

If sorrow was the wind
I would breathe it in
And never let it go
And I would not care

And so all of nature tonight
Would come into me
And I will swallow it
And all my fears will die

No sorrow, no pain
No one to hurt me again

O love where are you?
I cannot see you
Are you in this nature?

I’m sorry, I did not see you
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No Sorrow

Contributed by scrivonel on Sunday, 20th May 2007 @ 05:53:33 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

If sorrow was a star
I would consume it alive
And leave it to die
And I would not cry

If sorrow was the moon
I would lick its shine
And swallow it inside
And I would not mind

If sorrow was the sea
I would drink it all
And smile in delight
And my happiness I would not hide

If sorrow was the wind
I would breathe it in
And never let it go
And I would not care

And so all of nature tonight
Would come into me
And I will swallow it
And all my fears will die

No sorrow, no pain
No one to hurt me again

O love where are you?
I cannot see you
Are you in this nature?

I’m sorry, I did not see you

Copyright Â© scrivonel ... [ 2007-05-20 17:53:33]
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Re: No Sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by GemmaLouiseRose on Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 02:51:59 AM AEST
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mysterious, good xx

Re: No Sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 06:03:05 AM AEST
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OMG that was a wonderful write. Thank you for sharing

Whisper

Re: No Sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 05:19:18 PM AEST
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Yes my friend we hurt earth with every day that passes. As your fear eats it up may you protect it from those who do not love it.
Knowing that the opposite of fear is love truly showed me your wisdom in this piece. Well done

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