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Array ( [sid] => 134444 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Porcilen Doll [time] => 2007-05-17 14:43:31 [hometext] => Guys be careful with me I'm not as tough as people may think [bodytext] => Why do you ignore me
Why do you play rough with me
I'm only a porcilen doll

I may seem strong
I may be rough with people
I may be bold
But I go to bed every night
torn apart and crying

I am a fragile doll
who has kept her innocence
So be carefull when
you handle me
I may fall to the floor
and break

So be careful
When you handling me
I may fall and break
into a million peices
'cause I am only
a porcilen doll
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Porcilen Doll

Contributed by StoneAngel on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 02:43:31 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Why do you ignore me
Why do you play rough with me
I'm only a porcilen doll

I may seem strong
I may be rough with people
I may be bold
But I go to bed every night
torn apart and crying

I am a fragile doll
who has kept her innocence
So be carefull when
you handle me
I may fall to the floor
and break

So be careful
When you handling me
I may fall and break
into a million peices
'cause I am only
a porcilen doll

Copyright © StoneAngel ... [ 2007-05-17 14:43:31]
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Re: Porcilen Doll (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 03:29:04 PM AEST
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Nicely written young lady, may your heart be filled with peace and joy each and everyday.

sadaddy

Re: Porcilen Doll (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 02:53:15 AM AEST
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I couldn't help but commenting. I do not want to sound mean, but you have misspelled the word "PORCELAIN" throughout your poem. It was a good write, but it takes so much away from the piece with the spelling error. It just takes a few seconds to check spelling. Granted, we all make spelling mistakes, I catch myself frequently, and when I don't....I appreciate when folks let me know.

I do understand, as I am sure others' do, about feeling as if one is made out of porcelain.
There is a beautiful song performed by the Grateful Dead called "China Doll" and your poem brought that to mind.....
"Take up your china doll, take up your china doll,
Its only fractured and just a little nervous from the fall."
Thanks for sharing your work.
Much peace,
Laura

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