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HOW DO WE FACE OUR GREATEST FEAR

HOW CAN WE LOVE ONCE AGAIN

WHEN OUR LOVE IS FACED WITH SO MUCH SIN

HOW CAN WE SEE

THE GOOD INSIDE OF THEE

HOW CAN WE FEEL THE LOVE INSIDE

CAN OUR LOVE COENSIDE

DO WE DEPART

OR MAKE A START

SO MANY QUESTIONS COME FROM THE HEART

BUT AS FOR LOVING YOU ,IT'S JUST ONE PART

DO WE DENY THE FEELINGS WE HAVE

OR LICK OUR WOUNDS AND PUT ON SAV (SAUVE?)

CAN WE REALLY GO ON TO BE TOGETHER

OR IS THIS JUST A REALITY THAT WILL NEVER

NEVER BE WHAT WE NEED ,NEVER BE RIGHT

NEVER BE GOOD AND ALWAYS FIGHT

CAN YOU LOVE ME THIS IS ALL I WANT TO KNOW

GIVE ME AN ANSWER SO I CAN STAY OR GO

LOVE ME NOW OR LEAVE ME FOR GOOD

I KNOW WHAT I SAY IS ALWAYS MISUNDERSTOOD

BUT I CAN'T HELP IT I HAVE ALWAYS LOVED YOU

YOU ARE MY BOND TO LIFE ,MY SUPER GLUE

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SUPER GLUE MY LOVE

Contributed by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 08:04:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

WHERE DO WE GO FROM HERE

HOW DO WE FACE OUR GREATEST FEAR

HOW CAN WE LOVE ONCE AGAIN

WHEN OUR LOVE IS FACED WITH SO MUCH SIN

HOW CAN WE SEE

THE GOOD INSIDE OF THEE

HOW CAN WE FEEL THE LOVE INSIDE

CAN OUR LOVE COENSIDE

DO WE DEPART

OR MAKE A START

SO MANY QUESTIONS COME FROM THE HEART

BUT AS FOR LOVING YOU ,IT'S JUST ONE PART

DO WE DENY THE FEELINGS WE HAVE

OR LICK OUR WOUNDS AND PUT ON SAV (SAUVE?)

CAN WE REALLY GO ON TO BE TOGETHER

OR IS THIS JUST A REALITY THAT WILL NEVER

NEVER BE WHAT WE NEED ,NEVER BE RIGHT

NEVER BE GOOD AND ALWAYS FIGHT

CAN YOU LOVE ME THIS IS ALL I WANT TO KNOW

GIVE ME AN ANSWER SO I CAN STAY OR GO

LOVE ME NOW OR LEAVE ME FOR GOOD

I KNOW WHAT I SAY IS ALWAYS MISUNDERSTOOD

BUT I CAN'T HELP IT I HAVE ALWAYS LOVED YOU

YOU ARE MY BOND TO LIFE ,MY SUPER GLUE

Copyright © MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE ... [ 2007-05-17 08:04:44]
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Re: SUPER GLUE MY LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Shadow on Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 06:37:17 PM AEST
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i found this one to be cute. It made me smile i must say. Now, the flow was a bit off in some spots but if you changed the words at all the meaning would be lost. I would sujest perhpase condencing it all and apllying metaphors. This would give a deeper level to the poem. Personal adivce though, if the person you are with make you feel like there is little hope, you need to talk to them about it. This is where most couples fail. Good write and if you are facing this problem, you are in my thoughts. blessed be
-shadow

Re: SUPER GLUE MY LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 11:19:57 PM AEST
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Get married and dont live in sin. The poem needs more depth, try not to focus too much on making an A B A B rhyme scheme. Focus more on what you want to say then figure out how to express it

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