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Array ( [sid] => 134429 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Poison [time] => 2007-05-17 07:23:03 [hometext] => Dabbling in the darkness a bit. [bodytext] =>
Poison to all I meet
Venom rolls from my mouth
Suffocating those near
Breath you'll keep...I doubt

I'll turn you inside out
Make you writhe in pain
Set my past out on a clothes line
Everyone's to blame...cause I'm insane?

Biting with vicious words
Wounds they fester and smell
Living in my world, baby
Is like living in a freaking hell

I'll choke you out, sweets
I'm the weed that smothers
Delicate flowers wilt and die
My poison's like no other

Don't waste your wonderful life
Don't use up your precious space
Run to the arms of another
Go man, do so in haste

You stay, I'll suck your power dry
Pull you down love... with me
I'll turn you into something you're not
Just you wait and see

I seem to lust for pain
Constantly inflicting on ones' self
I do not deserve so called happiness
No man, that's for someone else

So let me again warn you
Let me try to open your eyes
I am poison, deadly poison
Womans' body...my disguise

Twisted somehow
Somewhere, but not sure why
All that I know is...I'm a poison
Causing all I touch...to die.



5-16-07 1:10am
Laura Horner [comments] => 6 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 13 [informant] => deadheadpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Poison

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 07:23:03 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry




Poison to all I meet
Venom rolls from my mouth
Suffocating those near
Breath you'll keep...I doubt

I'll turn you inside out
Make you writhe in pain
Set my past out on a clothes line
Everyone's to blame...cause I'm insane?

Biting with vicious words
Wounds they fester and smell
Living in my world, baby
Is like living in a freaking hell

I'll choke you out, sweets
I'm the weed that smothers
Delicate flowers wilt and die
My poison's like no other

Don't waste your wonderful life
Don't use up your precious space
Run to the arms of another
Go man, do so in haste

You stay, I'll suck your power dry
Pull you down love... with me
I'll turn you into something you're not
Just you wait and see

I seem to lust for pain
Constantly inflicting on ones' self
I do not deserve so called happiness
No man, that's for someone else

So let me again warn you
Let me try to open your eyes
I am poison, deadly poison
Womans' body...my disguise

Twisted somehow
Somewhere, but not sure why
All that I know is...I'm a poison
Causing all I touch...to die.



5-16-07 1:10am
Laura Horner




Copyright © deadheadpoet ... [ 2007-05-17 07:23:03]
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Re: Poison (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 07:54:01 AM AEST
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an absolute stunning write from you laurabean!! I love the wording and flow. this is actually a very relastic write on how some people can be posionous.. this is so cleaverly stunning.. great job here

Huggles,
JENNITTUDE aka vampyressJENNI


Re: Poison (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 09:09:18 AM AEST
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woo-hoo! some where back in time I think I dated her! lol! good work...Vincent


Re: Poison (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 10:32:40 AM AEST
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Wow Laura,

This poem is dripping with poison, the liquid that imparts destruction on human life. It is powerfully written, and the imagery is potent... a 100proof you might say. You powerfully depict the devasation that alcohol can cause.

Well done my friend.

Will


Re: Poison (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 11:59:19 AM AEST
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OUCH!!!!!!!

damn sis this is raw..... feeling and emotions punching.... Dark, I have never seen this of you before. I appreciated the power of this.

hugssssss
~Michelle~


Re: Poison (User Rating: 1 )
by RaineBurkhart on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 10:54:11 PM AEST
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Laura- it's amazing... you make me feel deadly wheni read it as if there's a power inside me i can't control.
~*RAINE*~


Re: Poison (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 03:32:18 AM AEST
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Wonderfully written.. Raw and powerful.. You did a great job with this poem.. I liked this.. Thank you for the comment on mine.. Much Appreciated..

Take care
christina




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