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Array ( [sid] => 134398 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why Would You Forsake Me? [time] => 2007-05-16 09:52:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Why would you forsake me?

In the time of the autumn wind

Leaving the moon to fade..

Just as the flower wilt and dies

You forsaken me..

Left me cold...

Not even the dove wings to
Embrace me..

I stand alone in the autumn
Wind..

Weary of time, weary and cold
Without one flower to warm me
As the sun..

Just melting tears..

Where will I be when the stars
Shred it lights..

Why would you forsake me?
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Why Would You Forsake Me?

Contributed by honey56 on Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 09:52:01 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Why would you forsake me?

In the time of the autumn wind

Leaving the moon to fade..

Just as the flower wilt and dies

You forsaken me..

Left me cold...

Not even the dove wings to
Embrace me..

I stand alone in the autumn
Wind..

Weary of time, weary and cold
Without one flower to warm me
As the sun..

Just melting tears..

Where will I be when the stars
Shred it lights..

Why would you forsake me?

Copyright © honey56 ... [ 2007-05-16 09:52:01]
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Re: Why Would You Forsake Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 12:19:03 PM AEST
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Dang why so sad?? I loved the write but am sorry for the pain that created the tender words.

hugssss
~Michelle~

Re: Why Would You Forsake Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 12:57:52 PM AEST
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The feeling of sadness is felt throughout the read. I hope that things will work out in the end. May your heart once again feel the peace and joy that you seek one day soon.

sadaddy

Re: Why Would You Forsake Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 02:20:11 PM AEST
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My friend the coin of love has two faces one is all joy and fun and the other side is full of tears and sadness; you have projected the tearful side of the coin wonderfully.
FRANCO.

Re: Why Would You Forsake Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 04:36:36 AM AEST
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wow a very sad but well written piece here.. don't give up hope in things there is always hope.. beautiful write though

vampyress Jenni

Re: Why Would You Forsake Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 06:52:53 AM AEST
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Sad as this poem is it's absolutely beautiful.

especially this line, i could feel the pain of your loss and stench of betrayal.

simply magnifcent. Tottaly true to life your a remarkable writter.

Ben

Re: Why Would You Forsake Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 06:57:23 AM AEST
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the time of the autumn wind . . . this is right out of a made for television movie. most beautifuly done.

Ben

Re: Why Would You Forsake Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by AirHead on Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 09:07:13 PM AEST
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We always search for the reason why something so wonderful is no longer, nice write thank you

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