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[sid] => 134287
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[aid] => mick
[title] => HAVE TO PAY
[time] => 2007-05-11 13:32:44
[hometext] => My 16 year old grandaughter, Anglestar, wrote this
[bodytext] =>
SultryRose's Signatures
by Angle Star
I don't get how could everything
go from perfect to nothing at all,
Then I found something better
but I can't let myself fall.
Now everthing that comes
my way will have to pay,
Pay in a way that is imortal.
Everyday that goes by all fades
untill that moment that I try to fall,
then once again they have to pay.
pay in a way thats imortal.
What could I say to make it all fad
fad in a way they don't have to pay
I don't want to feel this way
a way that brings me
upon a state of confusion
Upon one event brings
alot of feelings to pay
pay in a way that is imortal
How could everthing go
from perfect to nothing at all
When I found something
better but couldn't let my self fall.
[comments] => 11
[counter] => 316
[topic] => 43
[informant] => emystar
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 23
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => oops
)
HAVE TO PAY
Contributed by
emystar
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Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 01:32:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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SultryRose's Signatures
by Angle Star
I don't get how could everything
go from perfect to nothing at all,
Then I found something better
but I can't let myself fall.
Now everthing that comes
my way will have to pay,
Pay in a way that is imortal.
Everyday that goes by all fades
untill that moment that I try to fall,
then once again they have to pay.
pay in a way thats imortal.
What could I say to make it all fad
fad in a way they don't have to pay
I don't want to feel this way
a way that brings me
upon a state of confusion
Upon one event brings
alot of feelings to pay
pay in a way that is imortal
How could everthing go
from perfect to nothing at all
When I found something
better but couldn't let my self fall.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2007-05-11 13:32:44]
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Re: HAVE TO PAY
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 01:38:01 PM AEST
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Talent runs in the family.
This is really emotional, tell her to hang in there. She has alot of deep thoughts for 16.
Michelle
hugs to the both of you...... |
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 03:03:03 PM AEST
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She has written with her emotions which makes for great writings in my opinion. Tell her to keep on writing. May your hearts be filled with peace and joy each and everyday. Take care and many blessings.
sadaddy |
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 03:26:17 PM AEST
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Oh emystar, what a poetic brillence this piece contains as the message speaks volumes to this reader. What a blessing of talent you have within the family as I bow before your Grand Daughters gifted talents. Angel Star, you have such a wonderful gift that will always be treasured by your readers. I want to now say thanks to you for giving us all such a meaningful poem to savor and for giving us a little of yourself. emystar, I want to thank you for giving us all the gift of your special Grand Daughter. May you always let your poetic pens ink flow so your wonderful words of poetry will always grow.
Your Dear Friend
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: HAVE TO PAY
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by myheartsvoice on
Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 01:45:58 PM AEST
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That cursed price to pay for anything in life good as well as bad. each has it's cost of living that seem's to be more and more on the rise these days. peace to you my friend hang in there and don't let it get the best of you. another beautiful and well expressed peice of writting from a most compassionate lady. take care my friend . . .
(((((emystar)))))
Ben |
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Re: HAVE TO PAY
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 13th May 2007 @ 02:58:29 PM AEST
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| The continuation of ones existence is inevidable. Seeing this is proof to me that our fiber does definately travel to our children and their children like the past along indian tales. We will travel forward through the genes of all that we are. A wonderful piece that you have great cause to be proud of. We are all proud of you Anglestar...thank you joining us. |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 08:10:49 AM AEST
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| I totally agree. BOTH of you are magnificent writers. I really enjoyed this I hope she(and you!) keep up the great writing! |
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Re: HAVE TO PAY
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 09:31:56 PM AEST
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WoW!
Apple...tree......get it?
Very good...get her a page here. I'd love to read more. She definately has talent!! |
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Re: HAVE TO PAY
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 12:37:20 PM AEST
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your granddaughter does have all the ingredient to be a great poet, I hope to read more of here works in the days to come.
MAY GOD BLESS HER WITH ALL HIS WISDOM.
FRANCO. |
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 02:02:41 PM AEST
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emy thanks for sharing
anglestar, keep writing, get your own account, and pm me when you do:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: HAVE TO PAY
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 11:07:28 PM AEST
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| Reading your poetry and then your grandaughters emmy tells me it runs in the family, a very talented girl and only sixteen, hope she continues to write. xxx |
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by wheels on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 12:33:13 AM AEST
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Very emotional very deep.
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