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[sid] => 134277
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Dianna And Ben . . . Ben
[time] => 2007-05-11 06:10:34
[hometext] => This poem is dedicated to my son, Ben Jr. who after a long engagement with his miss right who he met in college who now are both high school guidance counselours, will be getting married in nine days, Seem's love is still alive and well . . . Ben Sr.
[bodytext] =>
Watching you
and remembering when
seeing my self all over
again, what goes around truly does
come around now it's your turn
to tread love's sacred
ground.
She's beautiful ben
both inside and out and as for her love
there's surely no
doubt,
oh
what a gift
life has given to thee
the sight of love
forever to
see.
The angels
have chosen to favor your life ,
dianna and ben are now
Husban and Wife.
Ben
[comments] => 10
[counter] => 180
[topic] => 2
[informant] => myheartsvoice
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 25
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => LovePoetry
)
Dianna And Ben . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 06:10:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Watching you
and remembering when
seeing my self all over
again, what goes around truly does
come around now it's your turn
to tread love's sacred
ground.
She's beautiful ben
both inside and out and as for her love
there's surely no
doubt,
oh
what a gift
life has given to thee
the sight of love
forever to
see.
The angels
have chosen to favor your life ,
dianna and ben are now
Husban and Wife.
Ben
Copyright ©
myheartsvoice
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2007-05-11 06:10:34]
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Re: Dianna And Ben . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 07:49:04 AM AEST
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Ben,
I have yet to experience the father and son feeling from the father's point of view but this does not mean that I do not understand it. And wow that opening stanza is quite striking. Remembering when, seeing myself all over you, your turn to tread love....WHAT A stanza! How powerful! How deeply true and observant from the heart's point of view. A quite amazing tribute to your son and his love. A must say this though short says so, so, so much. My congratulations on your gaining a daughter especially one as loving and striking as you express here!
WONDERFUL JOB BEN!
- SCM |
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Re: Dianna And Ben . . . Ben
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by Honey56 on
Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 11:31:55 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful & touching,it really is a gem you know..Congrats is in order..
Much Love & Blessing To You & Your..
C.S. |
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Re: Dianna And Ben . . . Ben
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 11:49:59 AM AEST
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Ben,
I can feel your joy I am so happy for all of you.
More grandbabies to look forward too tee hee.
Lovely write my friend
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Dianna And Ben . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 02:25:46 PM AEST
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Beautifull write, my friend.
Congradulations to all.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Dianna And Ben . . . Ben
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 12:18:59 PM AEST
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Beautiful write to your son and newest daughter. I wish them the best. (they don't have very long to go now, till the big day). Take care...
Much peace and love my dearest brother....
Your hippie sis,
Laura |
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Re: Dianna And Ben . . . Ben
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 10:12:50 PM AEST
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How touching that your feelings are so strong you have shared them with us in such a beautiful write.
As always a pleasure to read such warmth and feeling direct from the heart
Dee xx |
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Re: Dianna And Ben . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th May 2007 @ 12:38:13 AM AEST
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Oh Ben, what a glorious write! This is spectacular!
I obviously don't know what it's like to view my son, from
a father's point of view, but seeing my daughters
in love, is such a wondrous experience. It's so nice to
see how you relish your son's situation and sentiments.
It's always a wonder to watch our children grow and
experience similar emotions that we went through.
You captured this wonderfully!!
Stunning work, my friend. As always ~
~Breezy |
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Re: Dianna And Ben . . . Ben
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 02:06:42 PM AEST
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| It is wonderful to see your children happy and starting out life. A proud day for you. A great piece of work. |
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Re: Dianna And Ben . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 07:11:16 AM AEST
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awwww! so sweet! may your son know forever the love you share with his mom, bless you all:)
love n' hugs nessa xx |
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Re: Dianna And Ben . . . Ben
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by Dom on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 01:57:26 AM AEST
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I'd already offered you my congratulations prior to reading this, but I couldn't bring myself to leave this page having not commented!
I wish Ben and Dianna every happiness, and to you also for having gained a lovely daughter-in-law.
A very sweet poem and enjoyable read,
Take care,
Dom |
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