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Array ( [sid] => 134262 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To my sister [time] => 2007-05-10 15:20:53 [hometext] => this is a peice i wrote while in rehab when i found out my sister went bak to meth..... [bodytext] => you are my older sister

so you think this gives you rights

to mold your life lyk a pipe and smoke it all away

well lemme tell you

i may be younger

but its obvious

life aint always easy

you are the one i always looked up to

but ey,

i kno you'll make mistakes

as will i

but in tha mean time

ima take a chance

look up to you

but take my own advice
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To my sister

Contributed by greeneyes23 on Thursday, 10th May 2007 @ 03:20:53 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

you are my older sister

so you think this gives you rights

to mold your life lyk a pipe and smoke it all away

well lemme tell you

i may be younger

but its obvious

life aint always easy

you are the one i always looked up to

but ey,

i kno you'll make mistakes

as will i

but in tha mean time

ima take a chance

look up to you

but take my own advice

Copyright © greeneyes23 ... [ 2007-05-10 15:20:53]
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Re: To my sister (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 10th May 2007 @ 03:35:12 PM AEST
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I hope all works out for the better.
This is a strong write. Yes take your own advice you cannot make her leave the drug but you can make your own path. Meth latches on and doesnt want to let go.

Michelle

Re: To my sister (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 03:45:08 PM AEST
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Very sad but well done.
Hang tuff and stay clean as it looks like you'll have to be the leader.
Did you know that Hitler made the meth in the first place? It's sad that he's been gone a long time but he's still killing people with meth.
I'll pray for you both.
huggs,
emy

Re: To my sister (User Rating: 1 )
by brownsugar8272 on Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 02:10:01 AM AEST
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Hey maybe she just needs a little time. Be there for love and support but do not try to make decisions for her. Give her to Jesus only he has the power to instill that fear in her and deliver her. You must pray with your heart and have his interest at heart. He hear the prayers of a honest heart

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