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[aid] => Mick
[title] => time and forever
[time] => 2003-02-27 06:00:00
[hometext] => life isn't easy,,but there still tomorrow
[bodytext] => lonely walk,,
tells a tale,,
no-ones there, to listen,,
the journey is long,,
but not to far,,
to open your eye's,,
to things in front of you,,
shattered dreams,,
castles gone,,
hopes for forever,,
but now there gone,,
look time, it's all we have,,
time and forever,,
there your best friends,,
they will never leave you,,
they will never hurt you,,
they will always be there for you,,
no matter where you are,,
or where you go,,
time and forever,,
there your best friend,,
they cant love,,
they cant care,,
what good are they,,
they have tomorrow,,
things can be brighter,,
if you look for them,,
things can be easy,,
if you let them,,
no more castles,,
no more dreams,,
but time and forever,,
they will always be,,
they will listen to you,,
but never answer,,maybe,,
they will never question,,maybe,,
but they will show you tomorrow,,
if you let them,,
we live on dreams,,
we live on hopes,,
we believe that anything is possible,,
especially love,,
never give up on the little things,,
that mean so much to us,,
words are the strongest,,
feelings we have,,
they can hurt
especially when your all alone,,
craig s, meeks
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time and forever
Contributed by
spooky
on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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lonely walk,,
tells a tale,,
no-ones there, to listen,,
the journey is long,,
but not to far,,
to open your eye's,,
to things in front of you,,
shattered dreams,,
castles gone,,
hopes for forever,,
but now there gone,,
look time, it's all we have,,
time and forever,,
there your best friends,,
they will never leave you,,
they will never hurt you,,
they will always be there for you,,
no matter where you are,,
or where you go,,
time and forever,,
there your best friend,,
they cant love,,
they cant care,,
what good are they,,
they have tomorrow,,
things can be brighter,,
if you look for them,,
things can be easy,,
if you let them,,
no more castles,,
no more dreams,,
but time and forever,,
they will always be,,
they will listen to you,,
but never answer,,maybe,,
they will never question,,maybe,,
but they will show you tomorrow,,
if you let them,,
we live on dreams,,
we live on hopes,,
we believe that anything is possible,,
especially love,,
never give up on the little things,,
that mean so much to us,,
words are the strongest,,
feelings we have,,
they can hurt
especially when your all alone,,
craig s, meeks
Copyright ©
spooky
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Re: time and forever
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 06:09:23 AM AEST (User
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sometimes we dont have tomorrow them
what, keep searching |
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Re: time and forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 06:14:34 AM AEST (User
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You have analyzed very exactly. some people show tomorrow if we let them and we live on dreams, we live on hopes." as always thoughtful and meaningful.. venkat |
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Re: time and forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 10:49:47 AM AEST (User
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Craig very well said,I can relate to this! Never give up on your dreams & hopes for the future! Christina |
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Re: time and forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 08:04:20 PM AEST (User
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Those last two lines were wow amazing. I liked this it is very real and something I am sure a lot of ppl can relate to. Thnx for sharing this Craig... oh and why do u put those commas after every line? Just curious.
Bobo (Joel) |
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