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Array ( [sid] => 134182 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Breakfast on roof tops [time] => 2007-05-07 14:42:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I wish I could say everything perfect
Do you know what I like the most?
Even vacant towns would seem fun
With you by my side
The fan on in my room
You laying next to me
Time seems to halt
When you’re asleep in my sheets
I think one day I’ll surprise you with soy breakfast
And we can eat it on my roof
we can observe my backyard and park from a different view
While listening to 80's music
In the middle of my cluttered thoughts
I’ll look at you
And realize how wonderful life can be
At that point I’ll take the first opportunity to get close to you
The birds will be chirping egging me on
The sun will be standing there watching
As our relationship blooms to new heights
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 2 [informant] => shore1ines [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Breakfast on roof tops

Contributed by shore1ines on Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 02:42:18 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I wish I could say everything perfect
Do you know what I like the most?
Even vacant towns would seem fun
With you by my side
The fan on in my room
You laying next to me
Time seems to halt
When you’re asleep in my sheets
I think one day I’ll surprise you with soy breakfast
And we can eat it on my roof
we can observe my backyard and park from a different view
While listening to 80's music
In the middle of my cluttered thoughts
I’ll look at you
And realize how wonderful life can be
At that point I’ll take the first opportunity to get close to you
The birds will be chirping egging me on
The sun will be standing there watching
As our relationship blooms to new heights

Copyright Â© shore1ines ... [ 2007-05-07 14:42:18]
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Re: Breakfast on roof tops (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 02:51:20 PM AEST
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Well i think it's all good except the soy breakfast.
Well done.
big smiles,
emy

Re: Breakfast on roof tops (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 06:27:47 PM AEST
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Lovely to read, your joy and love is evident.
I particularly liked how (in my mind anyway) you likened the blossoming of your love to being in new heights, ie. eating breakfast on the rooftops.

I enjoyed visiting your page,
Dom

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