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Array ( [sid] => 134148 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Butterflies and Heart Melt [time] => 2007-05-06 11:51:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>

I trusted you with everything
there is nary a thought I did not share
I truly believed in us
and it seems you didn't care

I lay may hands on every inch
of skin that covers your soul
Afraid of nothing with you
I felt our love truly whole

Your words were always truths to me
Only past demons could cause doubts
I lived and loved and dreamt with you
Our heads way in the clouds

When I held your hand, my love
deepest vibrations were felt
tremble of lips to lips, hips to hips
butterflies and the heart melt

I could lose myself in your blue pools
so lost in a paradise
when held by you my love
No other view by these eyes

Dedicated and devoted
a heart so strong and true
I wish you could of believed in me
for I believed in you


Penned 5-4-07 [comments] => 6 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 75 [informant] => deadheadpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
Butterflies and Heart Melt

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 11:51:30 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished





I trusted you with everything
there is nary a thought I did not share
I truly believed in us
and it seems you didn't care

I lay may hands on every inch
of skin that covers your soul
Afraid of nothing with you
I felt our love truly whole

Your words were always truths to me
Only past demons could cause doubts
I lived and loved and dreamt with you
Our heads way in the clouds

When I held your hand, my love
deepest vibrations were felt
tremble of lips to lips, hips to hips
butterflies and the heart melt

I could lose myself in your blue pools
so lost in a paradise
when held by you my love
No other view by these eyes

Dedicated and devoted
a heart so strong and true
I wish you could of believed in me
for I believed in you


Penned 5-4-07




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Re: Butterflies and Heart Melt (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 01:56:59 PM AEST
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o`hon, this just tears the heart apart, I wish every good thing for you.. Vincent


Re: Butterflies and Heart Melt (User Rating: 1 )
by Lessa on Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 01:57:34 PM AEST
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i love this,
"I wish you could of belived in me
for i belived in you"
that line will stay with me forever


Re: Butterflies and Heart Melt (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 05:16:21 PM AEST
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Wow girl, whatever brought this on has created an awesome write even tho very sad.
Hope all is well with you-n-yours?
huggs, prayer, inner peace,
emy


Re: Butterflies and Heart Melt (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 10:55:52 PM AEST
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Beautiful & Tragic... the last line is a clincher!

My heart melted reading this, can totally empathise with it,

Loved it, as usual,

2sdy x


Re: Butterflies and Heart Melt (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 12:35:00 AM AEST
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I felt the tears and pain within these words sis. I will forsure be calling you this week.
Wrapping my arms around you for a long distance hug.
~Michelle~


Re: Butterflies and Heart Melt (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 01:04:40 PM AEST
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beautiful from the heart poetry...

love n' hugs nessa

roses




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