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Array ( [sid] => 134132 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Do You Care For Me [time] => 2007-05-05 16:20:29 [hometext] => My Question [bodytext] => Do You Care For Me

In my mind, I often wonder
do you really care for me
I don't get the feeling it is
what I thought it should be

The love I had for you
was getting stronger every day
Until you very slowly
chased it away

No warmth from you
over a period of time
Like I had committed
some sort of crime

It hurt me more
as each day passed by
In my mind and heart
I tried to find, the reason why

I thought, i had showed you
how strong my feelings were
And how you were generating
A very special kind of stir

It really hurts me
the way it had to end
You are no longer there
to receive, the love I had to send
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 2 [informant] => bruce [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Do You Care For Me

Contributed by bruce on Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 04:20:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Do You Care For Me

In my mind, I often wonder
do you really care for me
I don't get the feeling it is
what I thought it should be

The love I had for you
was getting stronger every day
Until you very slowly
chased it away

No warmth from you
over a period of time
Like I had committed
some sort of crime

It hurt me more
as each day passed by
In my mind and heart
I tried to find, the reason why

I thought, i had showed you
how strong my feelings were
And how you were generating
A very special kind of stir

It really hurts me
the way it had to end
You are no longer there
to receive, the love I had to send




Copyright © bruce ... [ 2007-05-05 16:20:29]
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Re: Do You Care For Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 04:24:10 PM AEST
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Awesome writing here.
good luck and good work.
Huggs,
emy


Re: Do You Care For Me (User Rating: 1 )
by irodethetrain2u on Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 05:27:24 PM AEST
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gosh... that's exactly how I feel right now...


Re: Do You Care For Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 10:52:44 PM AEST
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Bruce, a very painful and heart-bled write. If this is personal,
I am sorry. Sorry that you (or anyone) should have to endure
the stain of a broken heart. It's one of the most agonizing and
gripping pains we, as humans, must face.

There is a certain, (albeit somewhat inconsolable) satisfaction
about penning the emotions though. You've done a great job
at exacting the torment felt. Hope it's better for you ...

~Breezy


Re: Do You Care For Me (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 04:16:44 AM AEST
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Oh such a bittersweet heartfelt write. I know how this feels, and know how much it can hurt. Thanks for sharing such a good and heartfelt write. Sue x


Re: Do You Care For Me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 06:31:32 AM AEST
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Oh Bruce this is so sad,
what happened to this lovely lady that you were speaking of?? Darn it..... Dont give up there is a lady for you my friend. If you need to talk I am but a pm away...

hugs
Michelle




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