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SultryRose's Signatures

She hit a tree going 60 miles per hour.
by all rights she would have expired.
Her air bag bruised her body
But Jesus blood's never tardy.

Lord you know she's only sixteen.
Your power triumphs ore any thing.
She could have died at only sixteen.
You controlled the accident scene.

Oh great power who luv's us all
On my knees I adoringly fall
In thanks for your staying power.
So humbly adore you each hour.

Angel Star, my beauty Queen
God's dynamic power you've seen.
Aah yes, What a wonder you are
My precious, luving, sweet angelstar!

Faith can and always will move mountains.
Eternal luv,
mammaw star. [comments] => 12 [counter] => 311 [topic] => 55 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

ONLY SIXTEEN

Contributed by emystar on Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 03:36:29 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

SultryRose's Signatures

She hit a tree going 60 miles per hour.
by all rights she would have expired.
Her air bag bruised her body
But Jesus blood's never tardy.

Lord you know she's only sixteen.
Your power triumphs ore any thing.
She could have died at only sixteen.
You controlled the accident scene.

Oh great power who luv's us all
On my knees I adoringly fall
In thanks for your staying power.
So humbly adore you each hour.

Angel Star, my beauty Queen
God's dynamic power you've seen.
Aah yes, What a wonder you are
My precious, luving, sweet angelstar!

Faith can and always will move mountains.
Eternal luv,
mammaw star.

Copyright Â© emystar ... [ 2007-05-05 15:36:29]
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Re: ONLY SIXTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 04:23:06 PM AEST
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So Beautiful, mere words could never express, what you have written here.

Re: ONLY SIXTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by jenniferstein2007 on Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 07:25:22 PM AEST
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this was really good i think you could turn it into a song

Re: ONLY SIXTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 11:03:40 PM AEST
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Emy, my friend, you always write with such beauty and heart.
I am thankful for the safety of your grandaughter, and
for you as well. You inspire us all, hun. Your words are like a
beautiful warm hug. Thank you for sharing. Always~

~Breezy

Re: ONLY SIXTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 04:22:50 AM AEST
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This is beautiful, someone was really looking out for her that day. Lovely poem. Sue x

Re: ONLY SIXTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 06:44:42 AM AEST
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But Jesus blood's never tardy.

Is that not truth and gloriously presented I don't know what is. Wow a great spiritual write and glorious tribute to your grand daughter! Quite a wonderful job. I am glad to see something new from you. Touching and powerful emy!

BRAVO!

SCM

Re: ONLY SIXTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by Lele on Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 11:37:33 AM AEST
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This is a beautifull poem, remind me a good brasilian poem "O Cântico do Calvário" de Fagundes Varella who wrote for his dead son. Fortunately, your grand daughter had a happy end. I was happy for her and for you.

Hugs.

Re: ONLY SIXTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 12:36:11 PM AEST
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Beautiful. The last line was so powerful.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: ONLY SIXTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 04:51:00 AM AEST
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Emy, things happen so fast, bless you and yours, keep that wonderful faith. great write my friend. Vincent

Re: ONLY SIXTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 01:32:57 PM AEST
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Beautiful write emy as always. glad all turned out for the best my friend. take care. love that name also.

((((emystar))))

Ben

Re: ONLY SIXTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 03:17:05 PM AEST
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This truly a beautiful write and blessing that you have written and received. May your grand daughter’s recovery go by quickly. Peace and joy truly fills your heart Emystar.

sadaddy

Re: ONLY SIXTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 05:27:52 PM AEST
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omg emy! im so glad she is alright! my son tried teaching my daughter to drive last week and they wrecked too, also safe, but scared the crap out of me! i dont know what we would do without any of them, hopefully we will never know!

big love n' huggies nessa xxx

Re: ONLY SIXTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by veenu on Wednesday, 13th February 2008 @ 09:45:56 PM AEST
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u r really a great writer..............god bless u

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