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want
Contributed by
rhei76
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Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 11:29:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I wanna look deep into your eyes
Tell you secrets no lies
Let you fill my head with romance
If you like, teach me to dance
I want to sink into your presence
And treat you like a princess
I wanta kiss your lips
your preccious lips
I just want ta slip
Into your grip and fade away
I tell you, I want you babe
Every ounce of emotion
Every word of devotion
Every minute in this ocean
I want to be your device of floation
I wanna hold you dear
Because you bring me here
In my time of trouble
I wanta brush your hair
Because you make these
Feelings reappair
In my time of distress
I tell you girl
By far you are the best
I want to live you
And hold you
To love you
I tell you
Until they lay me down to rest
I wanta kiss
I want to kiss
You
I don't want ta miss
Baby you drive my wish
I look at your lips
And I wanna....
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rhei76
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Re: want
(User Rating: 1 )
by BEE on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 02:51:59 AM AEST
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| Great write very good keep up the work. |
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Re: want
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 12:17:50 PM AEST
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The topic drove me to read this ... but wow. If ever a poem
DRIPPED with "want", it's this one. You have done an
exceptional job of describing that which each human
heart is driven to madness over at one time or another.
Amazing emotion fills the vault of this piece. Truly a
remarkable and passionate write. Well done!!
~Breezy |
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Re: want
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 03:38:02 AM AEST
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Your words, feelings and emotions are dripping with the want that you feel toward this person. This was a very well done poem and very well expressed. Welll done.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: want
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by runawaynameless on
Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 07:33:28 AM AEST
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| I want................ you to call me!!! |
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Re: want
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 08:08:20 AM AEST
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| This is a really beautiful poem. I'll bet any girl would be lucky to have you as a boyfriend! |
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Re: want
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by needledancing on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 12:56:48 PM AEST
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| Well written loving words that all hearts wish to hear. Nice write |
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