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I wanna kiss this crap good-bye
I'm sick of fighting
Sick of crying
We are blood and flesh
But our thought and feelings never mesh
You're always right and I'm always wrong
I run in my room and blast a song
All the yelling
I am telling
Our relationship is dying
And now I can't stop crying
You were always my hero
And I'm just your zero
I always tried to make you proud
But this screaming's just too loud
Mama, I love you, I really do
But I'm sick of fighting with you
I know it's hard to admit
But we have seemed to split
You have changed and so have I
It seems we're different, though I try
You'll always be my mommy
Can you not see all the itami
Our fighting is tearing us apart
And it is brakeing my heart
But no matter how you make me blue
Know this: I still love you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 23 [informant] => DesolantDreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

Mommy Dearest

Contributed by DesolantDreamer on Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 12:05:04 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

Never seeing eye to eye
I wanna kiss this crap good-bye
I'm sick of fighting
Sick of crying
We are blood and flesh
But our thought and feelings never mesh
You're always right and I'm always wrong
I run in my room and blast a song
All the yelling
I am telling
Our relationship is dying
And now I can't stop crying
You were always my hero
And I'm just your zero
I always tried to make you proud
But this screaming's just too loud
Mama, I love you, I really do
But I'm sick of fighting with you
I know it's hard to admit
But we have seemed to split
You have changed and so have I
It seems we're different, though I try
You'll always be my mommy
Can you not see all the itami
Our fighting is tearing us apart
And it is brakeing my heart
But no matter how you make me blue
Know this: I still love you

Copyright © DesolantDreamer ... [ 2007-05-02 12:05:04]
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Re: Mommy Dearest (User Rating: 1 )
by Ihop on Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 12:29:50 PM AEST
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I understand how you feel. Me and
my mom argue a lot, but I'll never
disrespect her. Nice choice of words, except
for ITAMI. I'm not being mean but try
You are treating me like Ghandi

Re: Mommy Dearest (User Rating: 1 )
by Sena on Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 03:05:28 PM AEST
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This was a very expressive write...and I liked the word itami. You should keep writing, you're good at it and it seems to be good for you. Thanks for sharing.

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