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Array ( [sid] => 134002 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => happy ending? [time] => 2007-05-01 14:07:42 [hometext] => [bodytext] => everybody in the room,
shows nothing but smiles.
she is physically close,
but away by thousands of miles.

All around her,
are faces of beauty.
"put on a plastic grin!"
she assigns her this one duty.

Now shes back home,
back in her private room.
"that girl is so happy",
but they all just assume.

She looks in the mirror,
so silent... so cold...
She prays in her bed,
hoping to mold.

she wants to get help,
but wonders from whom?
then one day,
her parents heard a big BOOM!

on the right of her,
a weapon we call "gun".
on the left of her,
was her new born son.

inbetween them,
was their daughter on her knees.
with her mouth wide open,
screaming "please help me please"!

Her father just screamed
Her mother just cried.
Two minutes later,
their precious daughter just died.

On her desk was a letter,
of why she left this land.
trying to explain,
how they wouldn't understand.

Explaining in the summer time,
how she was never warm.
how her very skinny body image,
made her feel deformed.

She promised as an angel,
she would visit one day.
she hopes that her parents,
will forgive her and be okay. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 32 [informant] => wearinknotmink [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
happy ending?

Contributed by wearinknotmink on Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 02:07:42 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



everybody in the room,
shows nothing but smiles.
she is physically close,
but away by thousands of miles.

All around her,
are faces of beauty.
"put on a plastic grin!"
she assigns her this one duty.

Now shes back home,
back in her private room.
"that girl is so happy",
but they all just assume.

She looks in the mirror,
so silent... so cold...
She prays in her bed,
hoping to mold.

she wants to get help,
but wonders from whom?
then one day,
her parents heard a big BOOM!

on the right of her,
a weapon we call "gun".
on the left of her,
was her new born son.

inbetween them,
was their daughter on her knees.
with her mouth wide open,
screaming "please help me please"!

Her father just screamed
Her mother just cried.
Two minutes later,
their precious daughter just died.

On her desk was a letter,
of why she left this land.
trying to explain,
how they wouldn't understand.

Explaining in the summer time,
how she was never warm.
how her very skinny body image,
made her feel deformed.

She promised as an angel,
she would visit one day.
she hopes that her parents,
will forgive her and be okay.




Copyright © wearinknotmink ... [ 2007-05-01 14:07:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: happy ending? (User Rating: 1 )
by BEE on Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 02:56:06 AM AEST
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Wonderful write very good with expressing the feelings. Take a look at some of mine

BEE


Re: happy ending? (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 04:30:00 AM AEST
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wow this is a very heartfelt sad write.. it has a nice flow and its so sad.. great expression here

vampyress Jenni




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