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Array ( [sid] => 133991 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wet Paint [time] => 2007-05-01 07:32:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => waiting for rain drops to fall
the delicate flowers to bloom
for in time, all will resume
to a predestined groove
a quest for truth
ensues

sometime in the near
future brings a tear
a whisper is heard
a voice from the clouds
descends upon
the grass on the ground
the creatures in their homes
in fear
all the world
listens
in turn

empty threats
overflow with promise
all is encompassed
in generalities
broad definitions
gaping incisions
cut through-
cylinder tube
linking the chambers
of a broken heart-
with plastic glue
self imposed rules
sacrificial bruise
pain is the low cost to loose
proven onto who-
dares to ever become the fool
again

_____
__ [comments] => 2 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 43 [informant] => mangos [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Wet Paint

Contributed by mangos on Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 07:32:23 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

waiting for rain drops to fall
the delicate flowers to bloom
for in time, all will resume
to a predestined groove
a quest for truth
ensues

sometime in the near
future brings a tear
a whisper is heard
a voice from the clouds
descends upon
the grass on the ground
the creatures in their homes
in fear
all the world
listens
in turn

empty threats
overflow with promise
all is encompassed
in generalities
broad definitions
gaping incisions
cut through-
cylinder tube
linking the chambers
of a broken heart-
with plastic glue
self imposed rules
sacrificial bruise
pain is the low cost to loose
proven onto who-
dares to ever become the fool
again

_____
__

Copyright © mangos ... [ 2007-05-01 07:32:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Wet Paint (User Rating: 1 )
by scrivonel on Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 09:53:19 AM AEST
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I thought your poem was good. I didn't understand it fully, but enjoyed different parts of it and also the tone of the poem.
scrivonel

Re: Wet Paint (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 01:24:17 PM AEST
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This seems like a mesh of several poems back and forth... Not sure if that makes sense to you, but I suppose I don't care to elaborate lol. I mean it in a good way though, and this poem is like a reference to them, and what they meant at the time. The title has that "Do Not Touch!" feel to it... nice cherry on top!

~Scorp.

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