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[aid] => mick
[title] => feelings of Never
[time] => 2007-05-01 03:37:07
[hometext] => another one of my great ideas hehe enjoy everyone
[bodytext] => I've lost it all
when you made me fall... inside
the haunting dreams
when the soul screams for what was before and never will be
never I cry
Never I bleed
for you again
vampyress Jenni
[comments] => 9
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[informant] => Phantomvampyress
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[ratings] => 5
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[associated] =>
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feelings of Never
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:37:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I've lost it all
when you made me fall... inside
the haunting dreams
when the soul screams for what was before and never will be
never I cry
Never I bleed
for you again
vampyress Jenni
Copyright ©
Phantomvampyress
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2007-05-01 03:37:07]
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Re: feelings of Never
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by BEE on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 05:15:00 AM AEST
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Wonderful write very good with expressing the feelings. Take a look at some of mine
BEE |
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Re: feelings of Never
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 11:03:22 AM AEST
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You are queen of the impactual short yet never short on awesom statements made with such conviction and yet inevitable beauty in the art it self. your style is second to none,
and never misses it's intended mark. very
lovely as well as distinct Jenni . . .
Ben
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Re: feelings of Never
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 01:01:29 PM AEST
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Short, but very to the point. Good stuff, Jennitude.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: feelings of Never
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:55:35 PM AEST
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short and to the point, full of strong conviction...
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: feelings of Never
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 02:07:32 AM AEST
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Phantomvampyress, I am so impressed by this poem created by you as the message is vividly clear to this reader. You have such an amazing ability of reaching out and grabbing your readers full attention. I am certain that many would be so Honored if just a tad of your creative talent would rub off onto them as we all look up to you with grace, The closing was perfectly done. Thank you once again for feeding our strong hunger for more of you and for giving us such a wonderful piece to savor. Please keep those little fingers busy typing out such words of meaning as you always leave your reading fans warmly beaming.
Your Dear Friend
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: feelings of Never
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 03:30:31 AM AEST
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short yet very powerful. Very good writing. Great poem..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: feelings of Never
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by runawaynameless on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 01:58:10 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this. It sort of goes with the feeling of most of my own writing. I really enjoyed it.
-Jessica |
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Re: feelings of Never
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by Oceandreamer on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 10:21:33 PM AEST
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| Short,yet deep and powerful.A moving piece. I like it !! ~~Oceandreamer~~ |
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Re: feelings of Never
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 04:49:22 AM AEST
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| I agree with my friends here. You know how to grab a handful of words and punch some life into them. Good write. |
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