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ON DRAGONS WINGS THE DEVILS SINGS

FOR THE AGONY AND PAIN THAT HE BRINGS

HIS DEATHLY RATH

IS ON YOUR PATH

HUNTING YOU DOWN AND LOOKING FOR DEATH

WANTING YOUR SOUL , TO SUCK OUT YOUR BREATH

FLYING HIGH UP IN THE SKY

SEEING THE FEAR WITHIN YOUR EYE

THIRSTING FOR SOULS

TO MAKE HIM WHOLE

LOOKING FOR YOU TO BID ADO

EATTING YOUR SOUL ALIVE

DEVILS DANCE

ANGELS FLY ON WINGS OF A DOVE

SPREADING THE JOY SPREADING THE LOVE

BUT THE DEVIL DANCES DEEP IN YOUR HEAD

FILLING YOUR HEART WITH ALL KINDS OF DREAD

ANGELS SOAR IN AND THEY DO ATTACK

BUT SATANS MINIONS DO FIGHT THEM BACK

THE WAR IS FOREVER INSIDE YOUR MIND

JUST ONE GOOD THOUGHT YOUR HOPING TO FIND

NOTHING CAN SAVE YOU BUT JUST THY SELF

TAKE THEM OLD SINS OFF FROM THAT SHELF

OPEN THAT HELL AND LET OUT A SCREAM

FOR NOW YOU AWAKEN ,IT'S ALL A DREAM

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DOUBLE DEVIL DELIGHT

Contributed by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 01:36:38 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

DEVILS CHASE

ON DRAGONS WINGS THE DEVILS SINGS

FOR THE AGONY AND PAIN THAT HE BRINGS

HIS DEATHLY RATH

IS ON YOUR PATH

HUNTING YOU DOWN AND LOOKING FOR DEATH

WANTING YOUR SOUL , TO SUCK OUT YOUR BREATH

FLYING HIGH UP IN THE SKY

SEEING THE FEAR WITHIN YOUR EYE

THIRSTING FOR SOULS

TO MAKE HIM WHOLE

LOOKING FOR YOU TO BID ADO

EATTING YOUR SOUL ALIVE

DEVILS DANCE

ANGELS FLY ON WINGS OF A DOVE

SPREADING THE JOY SPREADING THE LOVE

BUT THE DEVIL DANCES DEEP IN YOUR HEAD

FILLING YOUR HEART WITH ALL KINDS OF DREAD

ANGELS SOAR IN AND THEY DO ATTACK

BUT SATANS MINIONS DO FIGHT THEM BACK

THE WAR IS FOREVER INSIDE YOUR MIND

JUST ONE GOOD THOUGHT YOUR HOPING TO FIND

NOTHING CAN SAVE YOU BUT JUST THY SELF

TAKE THEM OLD SINS OFF FROM THAT SHELF

OPEN THAT HELL AND LET OUT A SCREAM

FOR NOW YOU AWAKEN ,IT'S ALL A DREAM

Copyright © MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE ... [ 2007-05-01 01:36:38]
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Re: DOUBLE DEVIL DELIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by BEE on Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 05:11:05 AM AEST
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Wonderful write very good with expressing the feelings. Take a look at some of mine

BEE

Re: DOUBLE DEVIL DELIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by Gravehorn on Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 05:57:09 AM AEST
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In line three, 'Rath' is spelled 'Wrath'. There were also a few other spelling and grammar mistakes, but for the most part it was a decent poem.

For future reference, PLEASE DONT CAPITALIZE EVERYTHING IN YOUR POEM, IT MAKES IT SEEM LIKE ITS BEING YELLED AND ITS HARD TO READ LIKE THAT.

Re: DOUBLE DEVIL DELIGHT (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 11:45:05 AM AEST
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May the devil be banished from ones'soul....Take the angle and let it lead what the furture holds.....You know angels can do so......I know so well. Very good write, even tho its Dark........

Hugs
Brew~

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