|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Array
(
[sid] => 133878
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => my love alone
[time] => 2007-04-27 15:55:22
[hometext] => was then your theme
[bodytext] =>
oh, victorian rose, i loved you so well
bought n' carried you home last spring
your blossoms smelled so sweet to all
this year i waited for you to do it again,
~*~
alas, wicked snow storm a few weeks ago
you waited outside for springs warmth anew
to save such sweetness, dragged vines inside
oh, victorian rose, now ive almost killed you!
~*~
6ft high your arms spread, leaves in full bloom
little buds everywhere, we'd hardly the room
ah, but you, i loved so, all last summer long
i wanted you healthy, i wanted you strong!
~*~
somewhat lopsided, for i gave you that bath
you reside again by the door, out on the path
im not so patiently waiting to see what you do
for now it is sticks and more sticks which is you,
~*~
i believe in the morning i shall buy you a friend
town greenhouse has such a pretty orange rose
ill plant you together on the footpath by the door
oh, victorian rose, please recapture your repose!
§* *§
*|*
[comments] => 11
[counter] => 551
[topic] => 21
[informant] => ladyfawn
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 25
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Lifepoems
)
my love alone
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 03:55:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
oh, victorian rose, i loved you so well
bought n' carried you home last spring
your blossoms smelled so sweet to all
this year i waited for you to do it again,
~*~
alas, wicked snow storm a few weeks ago
you waited outside for springs warmth anew
to save such sweetness, dragged vines inside
oh, victorian rose, now ive almost killed you!
~*~
6ft high your arms spread, leaves in full bloom
little buds everywhere, we'd hardly the room
ah, but you, i loved so, all last summer long
i wanted you healthy, i wanted you strong!
~*~
somewhat lopsided, for i gave you that bath
you reside again by the door, out on the path
im not so patiently waiting to see what you do
for now it is sticks and more sticks which is you,
~*~
i believe in the morning i shall buy you a friend
town greenhouse has such a pretty orange rose
ill plant you together on the footpath by the door
oh, victorian rose, please recapture your repose!
§* *§
*|*
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
... [
2007-04-27 15:55:22]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: my love alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 05:24:41 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
that is sooo beautiful Nessa. :)
very impressive wrote
hugs |
|
|
Re: my love alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 06:41:00 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Beautiful maybe root feed would help. A simply wonderful write. Let me know if it blossoms again with your tender loving care
Much love
Angelxx |
|
|
Re: my love alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 11:29:10 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hi Nessa,
I hope your rose" gains its strength once more, super write. Vincent |
|
|
Re: my love alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 01:20:08 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
a very beautiful write!! such depth to the imagination.. roses are beautiful. especially red ones hehe.. i really loved this piece great job nessa!!
vampyress jenni |
|
|
Re: my love alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 02:30:10 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Oh Nessa dear...............
Your Poetry genius was a call to many of my favorite memories. Roses entwined up the back wall of my home, red roses for all!
You are so gifted my dear friend,
May your lovely poetry never end!
Warm love
consue
P.S. Is Crow back? |
|
|
Re: my love alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 12:29:14 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
" i believe in the morning i shall buy you a friend." . . . I know not wheather your more a geinus or an artist, i do know i enjoy your poetry imencely. This is lovely, you paint
with your pen little masterpeices of pure
literary exstacy. Thank you
((((Nessa))))
Ben |
|
|
Re: my love alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 04:29:27 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
A beautiful portrait you painted once more.
I hope the rose returns to its full bloom though I somehow know with the touch of your loving hands it will. DId you get the friend?? Send some pics??
Michelle |
|
|
Re: my love alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 05:00:52 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| wow beautiful poem from a beautiful poet, this man bow to your excellence, huggs Eddy |
|
|
Re: my love alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Muhammadshanazar on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 01:39:30 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
The poetess is a keen lover of nature, she being a representative feels herself killer of the rose, the symbol of rose is multi-facet dilemma, we in the pursuit of material gain are crushing the roses, certainly the world where fatal devices are thriving roses are becoming rare, only the poetess laments on the dying species of the roses and all other are ignorant to the encroaching catastrophe. The diction is simple yet it suits to the subject, theme is unusual i.e increasing indifference of humanity to the roses that really make the world a place worth living.
Love and hugs
Muhammad shanazar
|
|
|
Re: my love alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on
Sunday, 6th July 2014 @ 01:46:05 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| you always step up to enougher level Nessa |
|
|
Re: my love alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 10th October 2014 @ 08:07:31 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Lovely :) It is poems like this that make me want to explore gardening. Flowers are so cheery. An enjoyable read, thank you.
~Scorp |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
