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Round circular space vehicle
on it's orbit through time
Like so many millions of years
spinning
revolving
Growing to the now
nourishing Mother she is
Sustained we are
only by her

Humans?

How can you bite
so savagely at the loving hands
that feed you?

Penned 05/06 unsure exactly which year.
Laura Horner [comments] => 10 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 27 [informant] => deadheadpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

Earth

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:39:04 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Round circular space vehicle
on it's orbit through time
Like so many millions of years
spinning
revolving
Growing to the now
nourishing Mother she is
Sustained we are
only by her

Humans?

How can you bite
so savagely at the loving hands
that feed you?

Penned 05/06 unsure exactly which year.
Laura Horner

Copyright © deadheadpoet ... [ 2007-04-27 14:39:04]
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Re: Earth (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:53:12 PM AEST
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So true so true
good write sister.

hugs

Re: Earth (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 03:48:39 PM AEST
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beautiful.

love n' hugs nessa

roses

Re: Earth (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 11:02:44 PM AEST
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I just love this write,, and so real" in truth. It must be true, the small writes sometimes say the most. this is a giant" Vincent

Re: Earth (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 01:23:25 AM AEST
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a very wise write indeed.. well written laurabean

vampyress jenni

Re: Earth (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 02:27:22 AM AEST
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Laura,

I always admire your concern for nature and our environment, and your focus on responsability and preservation.

Well done my friend,

Will

PS I'm sorry for being so remiss at responding to your poetry, whichi I always enjoy. I know i'm not posting nearly as much either. Life is a bit hectic right now.

Re: Earth (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 05:06:35 AM AEST
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It's good to know that some things never change! It's awesome, that you fight for mother nature (although, recently she's been doing a damn good job herslf - Britain, April, People are sunbathing!!! Talk about global warming...) Nice write Laura, as always,

2sdy xxx

Re: Earth (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 08:46:18 AM AEST
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How can you bite so savagely at the loving hands that feed you? Laura this line is awesome and unfortuneately true. And worse yet that hand is getting smaller day by day. A beautiful and essensial peice of writting as always my sister Laura.

((((peace2u))))

Ben

Re: Earth (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 04:40:52 PM AEST
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I love this the ending so powerful and true.
Great write sis
Michelle

Re: Earth (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 08:58:36 PM AEST
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Ahh, Laura, children are so ungrateful, but not your audience. I enjoyed this poem, although Ol' Man Sol should get some credit for surface life...

Spike

Re: Earth (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 02:55:01 AM AEST
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How many voices will it take to speak these truths? Thank you for adding another voice. We must be heard. Wonderful pen Laura.

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