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I don't feel as close
From the feeling
When we were together
That feeling I miss
I love you
I just want everything
To be normal again
My life is flipped up side down
And my mind flipped in side out
Lets renew this
Show them what we are
How we are
And were we want to go
The love I have
Is somthing no one has
And I want to show you the rest
The stars
Moons
A new story
On a new chapter
Its everything about you
I could take
And live with forever
Hold on to and never let go
Bring this love closer together
Depart the old bad times behind us
Lets make the new ones
Even better
Forever and ever
My love will never stop

Always since 10-27-06

I love you [comments] => 5 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 22 [informant] => BEE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Far Away

Contributed by BEE on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 11:14:39 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Far Away

I don't feel as close
From the feeling
When we were together
That feeling I miss
I love you
I just want everything
To be normal again
My life is flipped up side down
And my mind flipped in side out
Lets renew this
Show them what we are
How we are
And were we want to go
The love I have
Is somthing no one has
And I want to show you the rest
The stars
Moons
A new story
On a new chapter
Its everything about you
I could take
And live with forever
Hold on to and never let go
Bring this love closer together
Depart the old bad times behind us
Lets make the new ones
Even better
Forever and ever
My love will never stop

Always since 10-27-06

I love you

Copyright © BEE ... [ 2007-04-27 11:14:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Far Away (User Rating: 1 )
by R0b on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 11:33:18 AM AEST
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Awesome poem I really like it. And I'm not just saying this but I know how you feel, especially about wanting everything to be normal and the way things were. Very nice write.

Rob

Re: Far Away (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:31:42 PM AEST
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I could feel the longing in this write. You captured alot of emotion throughout.

I am sorry that you are going through this and the pain it causes, though I have learned the hard way there are times there is no going back and though it hurts the heart we must move forward and find better things along our paths.

Best wishes

~Michelle~

Re: Far Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:13:26 AM AEST
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You are an excellent poet..I certainly love your work..Excellent write!

Honey56

Re: Far Away (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 07:05:00 AM AEST
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a very powerful emotional piece here.. well expressed great job

vampyress Jenni

Re: Far Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Quarryking on Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 01:21:48 AM AEST
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Good Write man...!!!

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