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Array ( [sid] => 133859 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Portrait Of Heaven's Desire . . . Ben [time] => 2007-04-27 07:30:25 [hometext] => A poem of love and desire consumated by the holy grail of all covenants, called marriage. [bodytext] =>



From

the very first moment

i saw you

my view was of more than a

girl,

That

once in a life time some body special

would soon be a part of my

world.


In

the time that it took me to meet you

in my heart i already knew,

forever was just a moment away

all that i needed was

you.


It could have been raining

so what did i care?

your all that mattered to me,

my eyes looked at you and instantly knew

little else did i need to

see.


From

the very first moment i held you

'twas a feeling i'll never forget,

so lost in each others kisses

seduced by the warmth

of our

breath.


Touching and teasing in all the right places

entering each others soul, a climax so pleasing

brought smile to our faces

so much for youthful

control.


Yes

the very first moment i saw you

my heart went from smoke to fire,

a masterpeice done by davince

tittle

" Portrait Of Heaven's Desire. "



Ben























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A Portrait Of Heaven's Desire . . . Ben

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 07:30:25 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry







From

the very first moment

i saw you

my view was of more than a

girl,

That

once in a life time some body special

would soon be a part of my

world.


In

the time that it took me to meet you

in my heart i already knew,

forever was just a moment away

all that i needed was

you.


It could have been raining

so what did i care?

your all that mattered to me,

my eyes looked at you and instantly knew

little else did i need to

see.


From

the very first moment i held you

'twas a feeling i'll never forget,

so lost in each others kisses

seduced by the warmth

of our

breath.


Touching and teasing in all the right places

entering each others soul, a climax so pleasing

brought smile to our faces

so much for youthful

control.


Yes

the very first moment i saw you

my heart went from smoke to fire,

a masterpeice done by davince

tittle

" Portrait Of Heaven's Desire. "



Ben



























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Re: A Portrait Of Heaven's Desire . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 12:10:49 PM AEST
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Oooooooooo Ben, I have missed you. It is so good to see you back again and your poems of love always make me smile. When I think of loving couples I think of you and your wife. You lucky man. *wink*
Peace and hugs my friend,
Laura


Re: A Portrait Of Heaven's Desire . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 12:30:24 PM AEST
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Ben my dear friend this was *gorgeous*
Joan is a very lucky lady to have such a special soul as her husband.
I go all soft and mushy on the inside every time I read your beautiful romantic writings, lol. Your poetry is so uplifting and you can always manage to put a smile on my face no matter how grey my day has been. A big Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry with us dearest Ben~
Much love to you & Joan,
Sue from across the blue~


Re: A Portrait Of Heaven's Desire . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 12:49:17 PM AEST
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Very beautifull and hot in a good way.
Huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: A Portrait Of Heaven's Desire . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 01:43:55 PM AEST
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beautiful

love n' hugs nessa

roses


Re: A Portrait Of Heaven's Desire . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:02:51 PM AEST
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A heart touching write as always my friend.
Always delighted to read and be refreshed by the romance you create.

huggles from ur pugges (hee hee)
~Michelle~


Re: A Portrait Of Heaven's Desire . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 01:35:38 AM AEST
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a very splendind passionate write.. so heartfelt written.. beautifully written

vampyress Jenni


Re: A Portrait Of Heaven's Desire . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 12:25:30 AM AEST
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First off Ben, let me say I ADORE the title. How beautiful.
And the piece .. well .. as always it's just filled to the brim
with adoration and romance. (And how can I resist that
wonderful emotion? I AM the president of HR anonymous
afterall! lol)

Seriously, a tremendous write of lasting love, right from
the start. Your work is such a joy to the soul, Ben. :)

~Breezy




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