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FOR MY LIFE IS OVER AND I WILL DIE

DEATH VERED IN TO TAKE ME AWAY

FOR NOW MY SOUL HAS GONE ASTRAY

FLYING HIGH TO NEVER BE SEEN

MY BODY LIES IN THAT RIVEEN

MY LIFE WAS TAKEN AWAY AND NO ONE CARES

EVEN FOR ALL THE LOVE I ONCE SHARED

SHARING IS GIVING BUT TAKING STEALING

NOW I LAY LIFELESS WITH NO MORE FEELING

MY BODY IS DEAD BUT STILL MY HEART WILL SORE

FOR IT IS YOU I WILL LOVE FOREVER MORE

FOR LOVING YOU IS ALL THAT I SOUGHT

NOW I REGRET THE TIMES THAT WE FOUGHT

I REGRET NOT SAYING I LOVE YOU

BUT NOW I AM DEAD THERE'S NOTHING I CAN DO

JUST ONE LAST THOUGHT AS I FLY AWAY

FOR IN MY HEART YOU WILL FOREVER STAY
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LOST SOUL

Contributed by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 01:17:30 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

ON THE WINGS OF AN ANGEL I NOW FLY

FOR MY LIFE IS OVER AND I WILL DIE

DEATH VERED IN TO TAKE ME AWAY

FOR NOW MY SOUL HAS GONE ASTRAY

FLYING HIGH TO NEVER BE SEEN

MY BODY LIES IN THAT RIVEEN

MY LIFE WAS TAKEN AWAY AND NO ONE CARES

EVEN FOR ALL THE LOVE I ONCE SHARED

SHARING IS GIVING BUT TAKING STEALING

NOW I LAY LIFELESS WITH NO MORE FEELING

MY BODY IS DEAD BUT STILL MY HEART WILL SORE

FOR IT IS YOU I WILL LOVE FOREVER MORE

FOR LOVING YOU IS ALL THAT I SOUGHT

NOW I REGRET THE TIMES THAT WE FOUGHT

I REGRET NOT SAYING I LOVE YOU

BUT NOW I AM DEAD THERE'S NOTHING I CAN DO

JUST ONE LAST THOUGHT AS I FLY AWAY

FOR IN MY HEART YOU WILL FOREVER STAY

Copyright © MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE ... [ 2007-04-26 13:17:30]
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Re: LOST SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 01:30:10 PM AEST
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sooo sad,

love n' hugs nessa

Re: LOST SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 01:30:34 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
Hang tuff, huggs,
emy

Re: LOST SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 07:26:07 PM AEST
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Makes you think you should tell your loved ones every day you love them, brilliant poem xx

Re: LOST SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 11:32:18 AM AEST
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THe soul you speak of..........WIll keep all...........How may you seek others, because ,this shows,,,,,its the ones' you loved.?!?! I feel for ones' heart who can not let go........breath....swallow, and think.......is it, what you can do...or mabybe can not????

Brew~

Re: LOST SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 11:38:25 AM AEST
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Not bad. However, you should scratch the all caps, it looks too much like screaming. Also a bit more spelling refinement would be none too ill.

Andrew

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