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WINGS OF PASSION NOW LAID TO REST

THE PASSIONS GONE WE DID OUR BEST

DEADLY SINS NOW LAY BEFORE ME

IT IS YOU THAT I DON'T WANT TO SEE

TO SEE YOU NOW WOULD BURY MY SOUL

LEAVING ME BROKEN AND SO UNWHOLE

LOVERS COME AND LOVERS GO

YOU MY FRIEND ARE A FREEKING HO

YOU BLACKENED MY SOUL AND STOMPED ON MY HEART

LEAVEING ME EMPTY KNOWING NOT WHERE TO START

STARING INTO DARKNESS NOT KNOWING WHAT TO DO

KNOWING BUT ONE THING ,HOW MUCH I HATE YOU

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MORE PAIN

Contributed by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 09:28:01 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

DRAGONS FIRE AND LOVES DESIRE

WINGS OF PASSION NOW LAID TO REST

THE PASSIONS GONE WE DID OUR BEST

DEADLY SINS NOW LAY BEFORE ME

IT IS YOU THAT I DON'T WANT TO SEE

TO SEE YOU NOW WOULD BURY MY SOUL

LEAVING ME BROKEN AND SO UNWHOLE

LOVERS COME AND LOVERS GO

YOU MY FRIEND ARE A FREEKING HO

YOU BLACKENED MY SOUL AND STOMPED ON MY HEART

LEAVEING ME EMPTY KNOWING NOT WHERE TO START

STARING INTO DARKNESS NOT KNOWING WHAT TO DO

KNOWING BUT ONE THING ,HOW MUCH I HATE YOU

Copyright © MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE ... [ 2007-04-26 09:28:01]
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Re: MORE PAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by niere on Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 11:20:20 AM AEST
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''DRAGONS FIRE AND LOVES DESIRE
WINGS OF PASSION NOW LAID TO REST ''

I love those lines. They give me this amazing image... and the words you used are all passionate ones, which adds to the sting and bite of the line ''...now laid to rest''.

All together great work, although one thing I didn't like too much was the line '
'YOU MY FRIEND ARE A FREEKING HO''

It just seemed out of place in the poem as it's slang, you know?

Anyway, didn't mean to criticise, just being honest. Great work, keep it up ;)

Re: MORE PAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 02:42:22 PM AEST
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STARING INTO DARKNESS NOT KNOWING WHAT TO DO

KNOWING BUT ONE THING ,HOW MUCH I HATE YOU

Now i really love that part .
take care

Re: MORE PAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 12:14:19 PM AEST
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The darkeness of HATE............give up.....its not there....it should dimish..........Let it go.......

Brew~

Re: MORE PAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:06:47 PM AEST
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I felt the pain and anger throughout.
Tis hard some time to overcome when someone hurts us deeply .

I loved the wording and strong powerful style of this.

~Michelle~

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