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Array ( [sid] => 133768 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => MY WISH [time] => 2007-04-24 00:48:01 [hometext] => IN CAPS [bodytext] => MY WISH IS, THAT SOMEDAY, AND I HOPE
IT REALLY, WILL COME TRUE
SO THAT I CAN SPEND
THE REST OF MY LIFE, WITH AND LOVING YOU

HOW LUCKY WOULD I BE
IF THIS SHOULD COME ABOUT
AND MY WISH WAS GRANTED
I WOULD, STAND UP AND SHOUT

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU
MY LOVE, IS FINALLY HERE
TO LOVE AND CHERISH
EVERY DAY OF EVERY YEAR

WITH A DEEP AND STRONG LOVE
AS WELL AS, AN UNDERSTANDING TOO
MAKING EVERYDAY, OF OUR LIVES
LIVING, UNDER A SKY OF BLUE

MAGIC, WOULD BE IN THE AIR
WITH EVERY BREATH , THAT WE TAKE
PLEASE MAKE MY WISH COME TRUE
SO THIS WONDERFUL LIFE, WE CAN MAKE

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MY WISH

Contributed by bruce on Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 12:48:01 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

MY WISH IS, THAT SOMEDAY, AND I HOPE
IT REALLY, WILL COME TRUE
SO THAT I CAN SPEND
THE REST OF MY LIFE, WITH AND LOVING YOU

HOW LUCKY WOULD I BE
IF THIS SHOULD COME ABOUT
AND MY WISH WAS GRANTED
I WOULD, STAND UP AND SHOUT

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU
MY LOVE, IS FINALLY HERE
TO LOVE AND CHERISH
EVERY DAY OF EVERY YEAR

WITH A DEEP AND STRONG LOVE
AS WELL AS, AN UNDERSTANDING TOO
MAKING EVERYDAY, OF OUR LIVES
LIVING, UNDER A SKY OF BLUE

MAGIC, WOULD BE IN THE AIR
WITH EVERY BREATH , THAT WE TAKE
PLEASE MAKE MY WISH COME TRUE
SO THIS WONDERFUL LIFE, WE CAN MAKE

Copyright © bruce ... [ 2007-04-24 00:48:01]
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Re: MY WISH (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 01:15:29 AM AEST
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Bruce, this was a lovely, lovely display of devotion and loyalty.
Your words wrap around the sentiment like a beautiful caress and
touch the heart of your reader so deeply.

(the only thing I'd suggest in the future, is that you lose the caps
lock. Internet etiquettesuggests that it is akin to yelling ... )

Great post!!

~Breezy

Re: MY WISH (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 01:31:08 PM AEST
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so lovely!!

love n' hugs nessa

Re: MY WISH (User Rating: 1 )
by bluestars on Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 06:33:14 AM AEST
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Love this piece
I really hope ur wish comes
true if it hasnt come true already :)

Best wishes

Re: MY WISH (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 02:02:59 PM AEST
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Great poem yes may your wish come true let's hope so, the world could use some good karma. Nice presentation.

Ben

Re: MY WISH (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 03:52:47 AM AEST
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Beautiful. This was heartfelt and lovely. Wonderful poem.

Take care
Christina

Re: MY WISH (User Rating: 1 )
by ThanhThanh on Wednesday, 23rd November 2011 @ 03:27:14 PM AEST
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i love this poem very much.
It reminds me of the time when I began to love and wish that my true love come true.
But now that I do not wish any more love, it still reminds me of those beautifully green years of my life.
Many thanks to the poet.

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