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Array ( [sid] => 133761 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Slaughterhouse [time] => 2007-04-23 21:30:34 [hometext] => a story of murder, bloodlust and the savage joy of the slaughter [bodytext] => Rise from your grave and bare witness to the beauty as
An entire generation falls mindlessly into destruction
Fed to the wolves as they writhe and grind in there agony,
An agony they created
Feel the unbridled lust of the slaughter
As it courses & winds through your veins,
Give in to the rage as it consumes your immortal spirit
Let it seethe and fester in your hatred and then lash out
Surrender to your vicious bloodlust and kill,
Raise your swords & strike at they’re hearts and minds
Corrupt them with your alluring savagery, oh how seductive it is,
How they scream…oh listen to them scream, as if music
Like a shrill, demented choir of lost children
Hear the sickening kiss of a blade on their skin
As you paint with a brilliant shade of crimson,
Smell the rancid air of burning decay
And dream, child of murder, dream your beguiling, bewitching dreams
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Slaughterhouse

Contributed by Immortal-Dragon21 on Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 09:30:34 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Rise from your grave and bare witness to the beauty as
An entire generation falls mindlessly into destruction
Fed to the wolves as they writhe and grind in there agony,
An agony they created
Feel the unbridled lust of the slaughter
As it courses & winds through your veins,
Give in to the rage as it consumes your immortal spirit
Let it seethe and fester in your hatred and then lash out
Surrender to your vicious bloodlust and kill,
Raise your swords & strike at they’re hearts and minds
Corrupt them with your alluring savagery, oh how seductive it is,
How they scream…oh listen to them scream, as if music
Like a shrill, demented choir of lost children
Hear the sickening kiss of a blade on their skin
As you paint with a brilliant shade of crimson,
Smell the rancid air of burning decay
And dream, child of murder, dream your beguiling, bewitching dreams




Copyright © Immortal-Dragon21 ... [ 2007-04-23 21:30:34]
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Re: Slaughterhouse (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 11:03:30 PM AEST
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i find this to be sick


Re: Slaughterhouse (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 03:48:36 AM AEST
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I actually found this interesting and amazing. I am just that kind of person. Do I dare tell that I found this to be beautiful and I loved it. You did a great job. Great poem.

Take care
Christina


Re: Slaughterhouse (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 01:50:17 PM AEST
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very sick and twisted...but an awesome write...great job

lots of love
crimsontears


Re: Slaughterhouse (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 11:28:52 AM AEST
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Interesting Indeed
well done




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