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Array ( [sid] => 13372 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => 4-19-02 [time] => 2003-02-26 16:40:00 [hometext] => found this in a pile of poems and notes... thought it was interesting... just as an fyi, i don't hate my brother. [bodytext] => The war between love and hate.
The points of authority.
The unreality of life.
Wishing for respect, yet none is given.
With these tears that I shed, I hope to be released from this circle of hate. You talk with all your might trying to make yourself be heard.
Only to realize that nothing was said.

You tell me to love him and trat him with respect.
Yet nothing but hate I from him receive.
He is your brother and you should embrace him.
I am his sister and like a stray dog I am looked upon.
You treat him like a god.
A savior come from the heavens.
I am but a disgrace that sickens you to look upon.

In fury you tell me to leace and do as I wish.
But the keys to my cell you keep.
Wishing for my freedom,
The end of this nightmare.
Either it comes with escape or death,
Both are welcomed by me.

You say you care for my welfare, but you do nothing to assure my happiness.
Locked within your own world thinking that they are all after you.
When will you see that this is just a lie that we are trying to live.
They try to make you see your mistakes.
But you receive them as bullets to the hear.

Now the tears have all dried up.
Its just too sad that this you will never read.
Once upon a star I wished for your love and forgiveness.
Yet now I loop upon you and see nothing but hate.
Wishing for something that was never there.
But like a tide this love will surely fade.
Trying to remember a day i truly felt safe.
But lonely I awaited in the darkness fearing for my own sanity.
Thinking of the time I rejoiced in your arms.
Its just too bad that it was all a lie. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 13 [informant] => bopeep [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
4-19-02

Contributed by bopeep on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 04:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The war between love and hate.
The points of authority.
The unreality of life.
Wishing for respect, yet none is given.
With these tears that I shed, I hope to be released from this circle of hate. You talk with all your might trying to make yourself be heard.
Only to realize that nothing was said.

You tell me to love him and trat him with respect.
Yet nothing but hate I from him receive.
He is your brother and you should embrace him.
I am his sister and like a stray dog I am looked upon.
You treat him like a god.
A savior come from the heavens.
I am but a disgrace that sickens you to look upon.

In fury you tell me to leace and do as I wish.
But the keys to my cell you keep.
Wishing for my freedom,
The end of this nightmare.
Either it comes with escape or death,
Both are welcomed by me.

You say you care for my welfare, but you do nothing to assure my happiness.
Locked within your own world thinking that they are all after you.
When will you see that this is just a lie that we are trying to live.
They try to make you see your mistakes.
But you receive them as bullets to the hear.

Now the tears have all dried up.
Its just too sad that this you will never read.
Once upon a star I wished for your love and forgiveness.
Yet now I loop upon you and see nothing but hate.
Wishing for something that was never there.
But like a tide this love will surely fade.
Trying to remember a day i truly felt safe.
But lonely I awaited in the darkness fearing for my own sanity.
Thinking of the time I rejoiced in your arms.
Its just too bad that it was all a lie.




Copyright © bopeep ... [ 2003-02-26 16:40:00]
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Re: 4-19-02 (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 02:57:05 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this very angry need to fix up the spelling a bit Great poem.

Bobo (Joel)




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