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Array ( [sid] => 133684 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How cruel is this love for a lonely heart [time] => 2007-04-21 10:22:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Wishing a silent wish I must keep to myself
Some time the burden is so heavy to bare
I keep asking myself
Is it fair

Alonely heart empty and blue
Sometimes
I still pretend you are away at work
And I write you letters that you'll
never get
Oh how cruel is this secret

I have given many chances for us all to
move on
But no one really
did
My heart just replaced you with another
But you just don't seem to go away

If things could have been different
You should have never had HIT

All would be so different now
I can only think but then again
I see you there alone and still not
working
Maybe it was better this way
In the end

I do not wish this life you have chosen
But my love for you has not grown dim.

Foolish that it maybe
I try time and time again
I am still helping and tell that there is
So more
Without me.
Praying He will finally be free.

But No
I feel him alone
I feel him staring into the dark quiet Nights
Like we use to do
Thinking whats to become of me
Yes he's as a child
He never had much

I forgave him but others did not
And so he's punished himself
The only way He has left
To still believe that there
Is a dim chance
But when

My Heart hears his still
I hear his call out too
When and how
Tommorrow or the next year
I can only keep this secret that I carry
cause no one wood
understand but Me

Whisper
Vote Obama ;-)



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How cruel is this love for a lonely heart

Contributed by Whisper on Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 10:22:31 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Wishing a silent wish I must keep to myself
Some time the burden is so heavy to bare
I keep asking myself
Is it fair

Alonely heart empty and blue
Sometimes
I still pretend you are away at work
And I write you letters that you'll
never get
Oh how cruel is this secret

I have given many chances for us all to
move on
But no one really
did
My heart just replaced you with another
But you just don't seem to go away

If things could have been different
You should have never had HIT

All would be so different now
I can only think but then again
I see you there alone and still not
working
Maybe it was better this way
In the end

I do not wish this life you have chosen
But my love for you has not grown dim.

Foolish that it maybe
I try time and time again
I am still helping and tell that there is
So more
Without me.
Praying He will finally be free.

But No
I feel him alone
I feel him staring into the dark quiet Nights
Like we use to do
Thinking whats to become of me
Yes he's as a child
He never had much

I forgave him but others did not
And so he's punished himself
The only way He has left
To still believe that there
Is a dim chance
But when

My Heart hears his still
I hear his call out too
When and how
Tommorrow or the next year
I can only keep this secret that I carry
cause no one wood
understand but Me

Whisper
Vote Obama ;-)







Copyright © Whisper ... [ 2007-04-21 10:22:31]
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Re: How cruel is this love for a lonely heart (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 22nd April 2007 @ 05:34:57 AM AEST
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Emotional write, I am not sure if I took it right but if he hit you you did the right thing. Moving on hurts when your heart is still involved but you did the right thing.

One thing I may point out
cause no one wood should be would

Michelle




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