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Array ( [sid] => 133683 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I look at the moon [time] => 2007-04-21 09:57:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Release come in many forms
Some folks find it in Music
I find mine
Looking up at the Moon

So close yet so
far away
Are their really folks more like me
Living on the moon

This life down here is just so ugly
We can not deny
That we've done
and done to our selves

****** chains of the burden
are grabbing
me heart
more and more each day
I wish I were on the moon
With folk more like me

Everybody is hating their neighbour here
And the Bees have all gone
Simple bees to pollate
Whats wrong with flowers

Skies are just araging
From the Oceans
they Open and spills out
the Vomit we have thrushed upon it
The Seas dont lie

*******a form of release
You can find it music
I find mine looking at the moon
Dreaming wishing I was with them

Nothing means what it used too
Everything is corroded, infested ,
Frugal, Tyranny stifling with its stink.
Relinquishing nothing, taking all,
malarkey ad maladroit.

*******yes I look at the moon a shiny place far away
Where there must be more like me


Whisper




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I look at the moon

Contributed by Whisper on Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 09:57:39 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



Release come in many forms
Some folks find it in Music
I find mine
Looking up at the Moon

So close yet so
far away
Are their really folks more like me
Living on the moon

This life down here is just so ugly
We can not deny
That we've done
and done to our selves

****** chains of the burden
are grabbing
me heart
more and more each day
I wish I were on the moon
With folk more like me

Everybody is hating their neighbour here
And the Bees have all gone
Simple bees to pollate
Whats wrong with flowers

Skies are just araging
From the Oceans
they Open and spills out
the Vomit we have thrushed upon it
The Seas dont lie

*******a form of release
You can find it music
I find mine looking at the moon
Dreaming wishing I was with them

Nothing means what it used too
Everything is corroded, infested ,
Frugal, Tyranny stifling with its stink.
Relinquishing nothing, taking all,
malarkey ad maladroit.

*******yes I look at the moon a shiny place far away
Where there must be more like me


Whisper








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Re: I look at the moon (User Rating: 1 )
by jenniferstein2007 on Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 04:18:21 PM AEST
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You are very talented and i cannot wait to hear more from you.


Re: I look at the moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 20th August 2007 @ 01:54:48 AM AEST
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wow, great poem! keep it up, and thank you for reviewing my poem.

Imperia


Re: I look at the moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawn17 on Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 10:03:59 AM AEST
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i love this poem

the Full moon is for me




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