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[aid] => mick
[title] => Alive To Me BUT Dead 2 The World.
[time] => 2007-04-21 06:18:15
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[bodytext] => I FELL DOWN CUASE I WAS CRYING SO HARD::ALL I COULD SEE WAS YOUR BODY IN MI YARD.YOU LAY IN THE GRASS WITH BLOOD IN YOUR HAIR::I TOLD YOU IF YOU WANTED TO LIVE TO STAY AWAY FROM HERE. YOU DIDNT LISTEN TO A WORD I SAID::NOW YOUR LAYING IN MI FRONT YARD DEAD. I CAN HEAR YOUR BABY GIRL SCREAMING::I CLOSE MI EYES AND WISH I WAS DREAMING. BUT WHEN I OPEN THEM ITS STILL THE SAME::EXCEPT THAT THE POLICE HAD ALREADY CAME. NOW2 THREE YEARS LATER I STILL SEE YOU IN MI DREAMS::I STILL REMEMBER YOUR DUGHTER'S SCREAMS. VISIONS OF YOU STILL RUN THROUGH MI HEAD::I STILL SEE YOU IN THE BLOOD STAINED GRASS DEAD. I HATE THAT YOUR DAUGHTER HAS TO MISS HER DAD::AND HOW WHEN YOUR BROUGHT UP SHE LOOKS SO SAD. I HATE HAVING THOUGHTS THAT ARE SO COLD::I HATE KNOWING YOU'LL NEVER GROW OLD. YOUR DEAD TO THE WORLD BUT ALIVE IN ME::BUT I WISH ONLY THAT YOUR LITTLE GIRL COULD SEE.
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[informant] => BeautifulDisaster
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Alive To Me BUT Dead 2 The World.
Contributed by
BeautifulDisaster
on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 06:18:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I FELL DOWN CUASE I WAS CRYING SO HARD::ALL I COULD SEE WAS YOUR BODY IN MI YARD.YOU LAY IN THE GRASS WITH BLOOD IN YOUR HAIR::I TOLD YOU IF YOU WANTED TO LIVE TO STAY AWAY FROM HERE. YOU DIDNT LISTEN TO A WORD I SAID::NOW YOUR LAYING IN MI FRONT YARD DEAD. I CAN HEAR YOUR BABY GIRL SCREAMING::I CLOSE MI EYES AND WISH I WAS DREAMING. BUT WHEN I OPEN THEM ITS STILL THE SAME::EXCEPT THAT THE POLICE HAD ALREADY CAME. NOW2 THREE YEARS LATER I STILL SEE YOU IN MI DREAMS::I STILL REMEMBER YOUR DUGHTER'S SCREAMS. VISIONS OF YOU STILL RUN THROUGH MI HEAD::I STILL SEE YOU IN THE BLOOD STAINED GRASS DEAD. I HATE THAT YOUR DAUGHTER HAS TO MISS HER DAD::AND HOW WHEN YOUR BROUGHT UP SHE LOOKS SO SAD. I HATE HAVING THOUGHTS THAT ARE SO COLD::I HATE KNOWING YOU'LL NEVER GROW OLD. YOUR DEAD TO THE WORLD BUT ALIVE IN ME::BUT I WISH ONLY THAT YOUR LITTLE GIRL COULD SEE.
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Re: Alive To Me BUT Dead 2 The World.
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by miss_aude on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 07:15:11 AM AEST
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| It's so sad, but so beautifully written. Such bitter-sweet memories, they are. |
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Re: Alive To Me BUT Dead 2 The World.
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by jenniferstein2007 on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 08:24:44 AM AEST
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| Great poem, but next time you might want to take off the cap's. |
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Re: Alive To Me BUT Dead 2 The World.
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 01:14:06 PM AEST
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| such a sad story indeed..beautifuly written though... |
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