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Array ( [sid] => 133615 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wanderings which cross ones Mind [time] => 2007-04-18 11:19:23 [hometext] => the brisk rain sets a mood......... [bodytext] => Rain falling
Dreams stirring, bringing up feelings which have never stopped
A soft mist falls on thy face
You close your eyes, and ....Know



This has been not a dream but some sort of reality, that has become clearer
Clearer in the mind, and soul
Cascading images
Flawless mirrors
With someone on the other side
Blissful whispers which follow
Sunsets which are brighter
Stars which are close
A never ending rose
Which never dies







Wonders never seem to cease the Human , Mind [comments] => 7 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 14 [informant] => brew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
Wanderings which cross ones Mind

Contributed by brew on Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 11:19:23 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



Rain falling
Dreams stirring, bringing up feelings which have never stopped
A soft mist falls on thy face
You close your eyes, and ....Know



This has been not a dream but some sort of reality, that has become clearer
Clearer in the mind, and soul
Cascading images
Flawless mirrors
With someone on the other side
Blissful whispers which follow
Sunsets which are brighter
Stars which are close
A never ending rose
Which never dies







Wonders never seem to cease the Human , Mind




Copyright © brew ... [ 2007-04-18 11:19:23]
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Re: Wanderings which cross ones Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 11:22:37 AM AEST
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I LOVE THAT ONE MAYBE IT SHOULD RAIN MORE LOL J/K


Re: Wanderings which cross ones Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 01:17:57 PM AEST
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beautiful, soft and flowing...

love n' hugs nessa


Re: Wanderings which cross ones Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 09:51:37 PM AEST
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Brew.. what a heartful write, pinch of sad" pinch of bright, just the right mix" great read. Vincent


Re: Wanderings which cross ones Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 10:24:25 PM AEST
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Dearest friend Dayna~
A soft, beautiful and very well penned poem you have here. You have a big beautiful heart of gold. I hope you find that someone special who will give you the right kind of loving real soon girl~
Beautiful as always. Thanks for sharing it with us~
*love & hugs*
dreamer


Re: Wanderings which cross ones Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th April 2007 @ 05:39:15 AM AEST
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Beautiful post, hun. I think this is among your
very best, hun!! Incredible imagery, passion
and beauty abounds within your words.

...and that last line .. powerful and true!
This is undeniably one of your most motivational
writes, Dayna. A sheer gem among gems.

Absolute and unpretentious. So exceptionally lovely.

~Breezy


Re: Wanderings which cross ones Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 03:05:29 AM AEST
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Wonderful job poet! I love the way you make gentle and soft transition from rain, dream, and into reality. Quite brilliant. Wonderful wording, flows with an ease even in transition. Quite an amazing and beautiful job!

BRAVO!

SCM


Re: Wanderings which cross ones Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 02:22:42 PM AEST
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I like this very much, a relaxing read. vivid and leading and i just followed along. Most enjoyable dayna.


Ben




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