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Array ( [sid] => 133610 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sigh [time] => 2007-04-18 08:05:06 [hometext] => Dedicated to Jacob... [bodytext] => BROKEN
She feels as if she is falling apart.
Wonders how she can move on after this.
Really thought that she had it this time.
Guess that she was wrong about that.
Thought that he was the one for her.
WRONG
She lies in bed as she watches the light fade.
Wonders if the sun ever felt like not rising.
Really wouldnt be all that bad in the dark.
Guess that it would easier to hide the tears.
Thought that he wouldnt make her cry.
OVER
She feels so ancient in this body so young.
Wonders what is wrong with her.
Really would like to know...
Guess that she just isnt good enough.
Thought that it would be forever this time.
PAIN
She cries out as she is overwhelmed.
Wonders if she will ever be whole again.
Really wishes he would have been the one.
Guess that she just won't ever be loved.
Thought that for once she could be happy.
DIES
She feels as if all hope is gone.
Wonders where the hell she went wrong.
Really musn't make that mistake again.
Guess that she wont ever really know.
Thought that this was it.
PEACE
She watches as he blood pools around her.
Wonders that she ever saw in him.
Really starting to get fuzzy, thats the way to go.
Guess it won't be long now.
Thought that this wouldnt happen to her....
SIGH [comments] => 0 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 75 [informant] => bon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Sigh

Contributed by bon on Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 08:05:06 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

BROKEN
She feels as if she is falling apart.
Wonders how she can move on after this.
Really thought that she had it this time.
Guess that she was wrong about that.
Thought that he was the one for her.
WRONG
She lies in bed as she watches the light fade.
Wonders if the sun ever felt like not rising.
Really wouldnt be all that bad in the dark.
Guess that it would easier to hide the tears.
Thought that he wouldnt make her cry.
OVER
She feels so ancient in this body so young.
Wonders what is wrong with her.
Really would like to know...
Guess that she just isnt good enough.
Thought that it would be forever this time.
PAIN
She cries out as she is overwhelmed.
Wonders if she will ever be whole again.
Really wishes he would have been the one.
Guess that she just won't ever be loved.
Thought that for once she could be happy.
DIES
She feels as if all hope is gone.
Wonders where the hell she went wrong.
Really musn't make that mistake again.
Guess that she wont ever really know.
Thought that this was it.
PEACE
She watches as he blood pools around her.
Wonders that she ever saw in him.
Really starting to get fuzzy, thats the way to go.
Guess it won't be long now.
Thought that this wouldnt happen to her....
SIGH

Copyright © bon ... [ 2007-04-18 08:05:06]
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