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Array ( [sid] => 133605 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drugs....why take them?? [time] => 2007-04-18 01:16:47 [hometext] => i wrote this poem with gr8 rage at those who blur the vision of life to others and with simpaty to those whose life is blurred. [bodytext] => me,emma,13
them
a nice couple
they helped me
thats why i used loved them so much
they were my best friends
my soulmates,
the other half of me
the parents i naver had as comfort
the friends I never had for play
they,and i say they
are the ones who helped me get rid of this word
a word i never loved
a word that never loved me

but what is love??
does it exist?
does anyone care about the other
or is love just like mist?
u cant really see it
but it blurrs ur vision
just like love once blurred my vision on life
and that made me dissapointed
but again my friends helped me
they got me in another word everyday
were life is simple...different from ours

thats why i used to love them...
thats why they took me
i never belonged in ur word
now my vision is clear and i see.
i loved them so much...thatthey helped me.

mum screaming....dad shouthing at her to be quiet...
...mum : ' i lost her..its all ur foult!'
....dad 'Good! some peace at last'
the ambulance sirens sing in triumh
i lay there.quiet.

True. Some peace at last.
[comments] => 0 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 66 [informant] => simone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )
Drugs....why take them??

Contributed by simone on Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 01:16:47 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



me,emma,13
them
a nice couple
they helped me
thats why i used loved them so much
they were my best friends
my soulmates,
the other half of me
the parents i naver had as comfort
the friends I never had for play
they,and i say they
are the ones who helped me get rid of this word
a word i never loved
a word that never loved me

but what is love??
does it exist?
does anyone care about the other
or is love just like mist?
u cant really see it
but it blurrs ur vision
just like love once blurred my vision on life
and that made me dissapointed
but again my friends helped me
they got me in another word everyday
were life is simple...different from ours

thats why i used to love them...
thats why they took me
i never belonged in ur word
now my vision is clear and i see.
i loved them so much...thatthey helped me.

mum screaming....dad shouthing at her to be quiet...
...mum : ' i lost her..its all ur foult!'
....dad 'Good! some peace at last'
the ambulance sirens sing in triumh
i lay there.quiet.

True. Some peace at last.




Copyright © simone ... [ 2007-04-18 01:16:47]
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