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And make you feel like you never felt a loss.
Then I'd hand them to you on a silver plate,
But I know that I'd only be messing with you fate.
For God's the only one who knows what's in his plan,
He's always had your life in the palm of his hands.
It is with faith and paitence that your wishes will come true,
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Dreams

Contributed by kathy on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

If I could give you your dreams inside a box,
And make you feel like you never felt a loss.
Then I'd hand them to you on a silver plate,
But I know that I'd only be messing with you fate.
For God's the only one who knows what's in his plan,
He's always had your life in the palm of his hands.
It is with faith and paitence that your wishes will come true,
So with all my love I hand your dreams back to you.

Copyright © kathy ... [ 2003-02-26 12:00:00]
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Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by invitroidea on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 01:15:47 PM AEST
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Its good but you spell lose without two o's and patience like that. It's got rhythm and gives the good word clearly

Re: Dreams (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 01:16:01 PM AEST
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Its good but you spell lose without two o's and patience like that. It's got rhythm and gives the good word clearly

Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by kathy on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 04:21:31 PM AEST
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Sorry about the mistakes missed them when I checked. Hope you liked the poem though. Sometimes the fingers go faster than the brain.
Kathy

Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 05:44:09 PM AEST
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That's so beautiful...

~ Moonlit Angel

Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 07:03:05 AM AEST
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This poems amazing i loved it and to tell the truth - i didnt even notice the spelling mistakes until i read the other comments. I get like that with a few of my poems, mostly forgetting to capatalise! A great write kathy, keep writing.

Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 10:43:06 PM AEST
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A selfless soul, in one breath you provide both hope and gentle guidance.
Inspirational write.

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