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[aid] => mick
[title] => once upon a chickadee
[time] => 2007-04-14 13:39:46
[hometext] => no pics, no music, no glam, but for you, a poem
[bodytext] => where mists meet mountains
far across horizons; come rains
ancient trees reach for the stars
with no purpose, nor direction;
she soars...
during day, when humans awaken
smells of lingering intoxicating freshness
the earth has given as a gift to the senses
ahh, alas, be it for those worthy
to sit in silence and hear the world; high
notes from life, a melody, mists shall pass
keep that as ones heart touchstone
once upon a chickadee.
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once upon a chickadee
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 01:39:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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where mists meet mountains
far across horizons; come rains
ancient trees reach for the stars
with no purpose, nor direction;
she soars...
during day, when humans awaken
smells of lingering intoxicating freshness
the earth has given as a gift to the senses
ahh, alas, be it for those worthy
to sit in silence and hear the world; high
notes from life, a melody, mists shall pass
keep that as ones heart touchstone
once upon a chickadee.
§* *§
*|*
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Re: once upon a chickadee
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by emystar on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 02:29:47 PM AEST
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gREAT WRITING, GIRLFRIEND.
iT'S SO GOOD TO HAVE YOU BACK POSTING AGAIN.
wELCOME HOME.
BIG HUGGS, SMILES,
emy |
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Re: once upon a chickadee
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 06:51:35 PM AEST
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I agree with Emy
what a great piece,
and long time no see
welcome back |
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Re: once upon a chickadee
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by alasdaircairns on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 10:06:01 PM AEST
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| So, so lucid. Lovely piece. Will read this again and again. xx |
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Re: once upon a chickadee
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by GingerB on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 12:31:24 AM AEST
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Great to see you here again, Ness. Miss our chats that go way back.
Love and (((((Hugs))))))
Ginny |
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Re: once upon a chickadee
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 09:33:04 AM AEST
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Oh Nessa, I have missed you hun. This site suffers when you are not here, you know? And, I, certainly, as well as many others, need to read your poetry, k? Please don't go away for so long again. *hugs tight*
This is lovely. It is so free, and relaxing to read... I so wish I could fly.
Wonderful write, hun... like a fresh breeze in a stale room.
*huuuuge hugs*
Phil xxx
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Re: once upon a chickadee
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by Crow on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 11:59:47 AM AEST
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| Nessa, what an excellent poem, refreshing read..Vincent |
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Re: once upon a chickadee
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 08:12:48 PM AEST
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Nessa~
Philly Girl sums it up for me hun. This site sure does suffer when you go away. Please don't stay away anymore girl. We love and need you here.
By the way I so love the title of your write it's so cute and your poem is a most pleasant and enjoyable one to read~
love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: once upon a chickadee
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 02:39:48 AM AEST
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This is simply beautiful..
Blessings.. |
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Re: once upon a chickadee
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 03:46:37 AM AEST
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Oh Nessa, how lovely to have you back. :)
@--->-------
What a beautiful piece for your return. There is a gorgeous emotion
wafting throughout the lines here, hun. And it is so serenly felt ... I
miss the sunshine and the fragrance of spring, not to mention
those amazing voices that sing aloft.
Stunning piece Nessa. Welcome back. :)
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: once upon a chickadee
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 17th April 2007 @ 04:48:28 PM AEST
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Seems I might have spoken too early ... I must have been away when you were posting these other gems ... I'll endeavor to visit again and catch up.
Nazzy ~
( squeezies ) |
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Re: once upon a chickadee
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 10:02:12 PM AEST
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| Excellent.You paint a wonderful picture with a brush of words my friend. |
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Re: once upon a chickadee
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by Butterat_Zool on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 08:19:52 PM AEST
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I find great appeal in the raw simplicity of this piece. It's like an oil painting where just a few strokes on a plain canvas lead to peace or enlightenment. Your display of restraint, for this could EASILY have been overdone, is a testament to your unique talent. And here, in this one image, this still piece of time, is life itself, and perhaps, if you look closely enough, one might even discern the face of God.
BZ. |
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Re: once upon a chickadee
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by colinb on
Monday, 7th July 2014 @ 04:57:30 PM AEST
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| simply beautiful |
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