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Array ( [sid] => 133466 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => life [time] => 2007-04-12 17:43:35 [hometext] => first poem i've posted in a while. [bodytext] => So cold and frigid
Lost thoughts so rigid
Moral values so lost in the air
slow death, so sudden and unfair
green arrays of star stricken with grief
mid day crisis with no such thing as relief
life as we know it is set to end
set to begin, set to descend
into humanities drug influenced hands
of stress filled days with stress reduced daze
it's crime that drives us to kill with spiteful might
crime, a dividend to mans one chosen fate
one step at a time that’s how life is lived
One breath to last a moment, this moment a gift
We act so carelessly when it comes to love
Throwing the wordage to match penis envy’s drugs
Why deprive one’s self of a peaceful nature?
Expression of one’s beauty is far more greater
Eyes so focused on money equals greed
Corruption of ones heart, this heart not freed
It’s all pointless to waste on nothing, but pain
Senseless conflict of men who are truly insane
Life it only appears in four letters
Merely to contrast with no such other
Love yet the same, but so much different
It creates destruction with heart break so stricken
Stricken with the emotion of fear and strain
Stricken with the devotion of life’s constant drain
We slave for greatness, high in the forecasted sky
To roam with the gods and heavens eyes
Constantly battling for the dominant side
To chose the greatest word influenced shrines
We the people live these life’s
So caught up in road written cries
To end with the days fast paste ways
Of burial sentences and masker ayes
We choose to move one foot over the next
So the days will remain more intact and correct
We sore like birds, so lost in flight
Because it’s freedom we want, mans ultimate strife
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life

Contributed by Epic on Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 05:43:35 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



So cold and frigid
Lost thoughts so rigid
Moral values so lost in the air
slow death, so sudden and unfair
green arrays of star stricken with grief
mid day crisis with no such thing as relief
life as we know it is set to end
set to begin, set to descend
into humanities drug influenced hands
of stress filled days with stress reduced daze
it's crime that drives us to kill with spiteful might
crime, a dividend to mans one chosen fate
one step at a time that’s how life is lived
One breath to last a moment, this moment a gift
We act so carelessly when it comes to love
Throwing the wordage to match penis envy’s drugs
Why deprive one’s self of a peaceful nature?
Expression of one’s beauty is far more greater
Eyes so focused on money equals greed
Corruption of ones heart, this heart not freed
It’s all pointless to waste on nothing, but pain
Senseless conflict of men who are truly insane
Life it only appears in four letters
Merely to contrast with no such other
Love yet the same, but so much different
It creates destruction with heart break so stricken
Stricken with the emotion of fear and strain
Stricken with the devotion of life’s constant drain
We slave for greatness, high in the forecasted sky
To roam with the gods and heavens eyes
Constantly battling for the dominant side
To chose the greatest word influenced shrines
We the people live these life’s
So caught up in road written cries
To end with the days fast paste ways
Of burial sentences and masker ayes
We choose to move one foot over the next
So the days will remain more intact and correct
We sore like birds, so lost in flight
Because it’s freedom we want, mans ultimate strife




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Re: life (User Rating: 1 )
by yackerz85 on Friday, 13th April 2007 @ 08:05:41 AM AEST
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This poem has very good insight to life, love, dreams, and ambitions. I like how you didn't divide it into stanzas but kept it as one complete paragraph. This emphasizes how the mind ponders these thing switching from one subject to another. Anyways, nice job. I always enjoy reading this topic of poetry.




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