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Reguardless of all the gloom, that totes on my mind.
Sometimes has changed to sun light, and I can not sleep,
I just want to bask...
When feelings are feelings I will wait til tomorrow, Hope and believe they will stay,
I believe everything I say, and trust in what she thinks.
If the rain never clears, I still saw the light for a few days,
I don't know what it means, but I won't forget how it feels.
Like there is a reason to smile, something to think,
the notion of having someone to reflect off
"Would she say this is cool? Would she be okay with this?
I won't offend her with this? wait I can't do that, she will kill me."
Oh, my darkness seems to glow. All my thoughts a positive radiant flow,
like whatever happens in the end I still know.
I lived all my life just to feel.
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waking up

Contributed by rhei76 on Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 03:45:04 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Oh, the world seems to shine.
Reguardless of all the gloom, that totes on my mind.
Sometimes has changed to sun light, and I can not sleep,
I just want to bask...
When feelings are feelings I will wait til tomorrow, Hope and believe they will stay,
I believe everything I say, and trust in what she thinks.
If the rain never clears, I still saw the light for a few days,
I don't know what it means, but I won't forget how it feels.
Like there is a reason to smile, something to think,
the notion of having someone to reflect off
"Would she say this is cool? Would she be okay with this?
I won't offend her with this? wait I can't do that, she will kill me."
Oh, my darkness seems to glow. All my thoughts a positive radiant flow,
like whatever happens in the end I still know.
I lived all my life just to feel.

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2007-04-12 15:45:04]
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Re: waking up (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 04:15:15 PM AEST
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This was an Excellent poem. I loved the flow of this, great job!

Re: waking up (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 11:36:11 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful write of a mindset that can see a calm in all around them even sad days and still have an optomistic view. The love of being able to feel and enjoy their own feelings a wonderful positive write thoroughly enjoyed by this reader.

Re: waking up (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Friday, 13th April 2007 @ 05:21:15 AM AEST
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I agree, the write is matter-of fact. I really enjoyed this work.

"If the rain never clears, I still saw the light for a few days,"

very cool line" Vincent

Re: waking up (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 13th April 2007 @ 09:13:56 AM AEST
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rhei, that last line is fabulous! And well said.

This has such a nice, I-don't-know-what-the-future-holds-but-I'm-enjoying-the-now
feel to it. I wish more would embrace life with that kind of sentiment. 'Tis sad that so many
are given the opportunity, yet seem to never appreciate it. You captured a fine point here,
my friend.

Great post!

~Breezy

Re: waking up (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 02:46:22 PM AEST
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lovely:)

love n' hugs nessa

Re: waking up (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 10:23:09 PM AEST
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Brillant. This was a well crafted poem. You did a great job writing this. Beautiful.

Take care
Christina

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