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Little Family Buns
Contributed by
desireemiote
on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 10:53:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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One in the oven
one freshly made
hoping to get
something opposite
yet in most other ways
quite the same
no light in the oven
not yet anyways
we'll get to peek
When the time is right
needing no surprises
checking to see
if evenly raised
These buns so delicate
none compare
Passed down
Through the family
traditional recipe
handled with care
Copyright ©
desireemiote
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2007-04-10 10:53:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Little Family Buns
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 11:20:13 AM AEST (User
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This is simply beautifull.
Hope you get your little girl.
Big huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Little Family Buns
(User Rating: 1 ) by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 06:56:21 AM AEST (User
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This was lovely metaphoric write.
Hope you get your wish.
Peace
~Shannon |
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