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Array ( [sid] => 133373 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Honey Thank You For Your Love . . . Ben [time] => 2007-04-09 02:30:32 [hometext] => I apologize if i sounded a little to cavilere in my last poem, i'm sure every one has ther own problems and does the best they can. A hapy easter to all. peace and love. Ben [bodytext] =>

I wish i possessed the ultimate power

of love, so i could snap my fingers and

give you all for a life time, what it is i've

been lucky enough to have.

Dedicated to the women who's given me more

than i could ever hope for and perhaps more than

i deserve.

So

vast

may be

the universe

so deep may

be the sea,

and

yet

so

insignificant

without you they would

be.

So

colorful

the rainbow

so bright the

sun above,

and yet in tottal darkness

would i be without your

love.

What

good would be

the moonlight? in all it's

radiant bliss, without you in

my arms at night sharing

your sweet

kiss.

How

useless

all the stars would be

that fill the night time skies,

gone would be the glow replaced

by tears within there

eyes.

And

so my love permit me

just a moment of your time,

to tell you something more than

one could say whithin a

rhyme.

it's

just a little phrase

i offer quite simplisticly,

honey thank you for your love

you've alway's given

me.

Ben

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Honey Thank You For Your Love . . . Ben

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:30:32 AM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems

I wish i possessed the ultimate power

of love, so i could snap my fingers and

give you all for a life time, what it is i've

been lucky enough to have.

Dedicated to the women who's given me more

than i could ever hope for and perhaps more than

i deserve.

So

vast

may be

the universe

so deep may

be the sea,

and

yet

so

insignificant

without you they would

be.

So

colorful

the rainbow

so bright the

sun above,

and yet in tottal darkness

would i be without your

love.

What

good would be

the moonlight? in all it's

radiant bliss, without you in

my arms at night sharing

your sweet

kiss.

How

useless

all the stars would be

that fill the night time skies,

gone would be the glow replaced

by tears within there

eyes.

And

so my love permit me

just a moment of your time,

to tell you something more than

one could say whithin a

rhyme.

it's

just a little phrase

i offer quite simplisticly,

honey thank you for your love

you've alway's given

me.

Ben

Copyright © myheartsvoice ... [ 2007-04-09 02:30:32]
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Re: Honey Thank You For Your Love . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:50:54 AM AEST
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Ben, this was a beautiful moving piece filled with the
most loving thoughts and gratitude. You always have
a wonderful way of capturing the emotion of true love and
expressing it with profound and thankful grace. Kudos.

Your author's note is so very touching too.
Just lovely ~

~Breezy

Re: Honey Thank You For Your Love . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 01:26:04 PM AEST
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A wonderful opening of a heart of gentleness, devotion and ability to reveal the inner self.
To worship the joy of another soul so completely. Well done.

Re: Honey Thank You For Your Love . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:19:03 PM AEST
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Beautifull, my friend.
Awesome.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Honey Thank You For Your Love . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 09:33:03 PM AEST
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Many *hugs* to you my dear friend. I so much needed a pick me up and I knew exactly where to go to find it. I found myself at your wonderful poetry pages once again.
Beautifully penned and expressed. Leaves the reader warm hearted and wearing a smile. A most touching,enchanting and beautifully composed masterpiece. Thanks once again for sharing with us your outstanding and magical poetry.
love, hugs & prayers your fan/friend,
sue m

Re: Honey Thank You For Your Love . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 11th April 2007 @ 02:40:42 AM AEST
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beatiful dedication another lovely write

Vampyress jenni

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