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in the blowing wind
i sit alone
slowly inhaling my cigarette
listening to the night

why am i not in bed
next to my beloved
who sleeps peacefully?
it's hard to sleep
when thoughts race constantly
through my mind...

the raven i have become
tap tap tapping
at your windowpane

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the raven i have become

Contributed by LadyDama on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 06:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

wind chimes sing quietly
in the blowing wind
i sit alone
slowly inhaling my cigarette
listening to the night

why am i not in bed
next to my beloved
who sleeps peacefully?
it's hard to sleep
when thoughts race constantly
through my mind...

the raven i have become
tap tap tapping
at your windowpane

2-24-03 1:30 AM

Copyright © LadyDama ... [ 2003-02-26 06:20:00]
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Re: the raven i have become (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 11:44:49 AM AEST
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Every time you write I see myself behind your pen so very true this is for me! Great one! Christina

Re: the raven i have become (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 10:31:15 PM AEST
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a memory of times past you've brought back so vividly to me... I had forgotten....well done..
rosie

Re: the raven i have become (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 11:01:12 AM AEST
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thats usually when the best words are found, well done,

Re: the raven i have become (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 01:54:50 AM AEST
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Changed rather abruptly. This was good don't know why it changed though. Keep on feeling and posting.

Bobo (Joel)

P.S. thnx for commenting on my poems

Re: the raven i have become (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 05:13:59 AM AEST
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agrees best time and i have often been staring out the window late at night
excellent write

peace be your jouney

terry

Re: the raven i have become (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 02:19:31 AM AEST
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This is really great I also refer to myself as a Raven though under different circumstances. I love the way you brought it together.

Re: the raven i have become (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 02:44:55 AM AEST
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Raven... it is amazing your identification with a raven. I have many pictures of ravens, vampires, angels and a great collection of fantasy beings along with gods and goddesses.I feel raven is also a true spirit of nature... this poem is very interesting. venkat

Re: the raven i have become (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 06:39:19 PM AEST
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love this, i've windchimes too, and sit at awake at night quite often, excellent write:) huggs nessa

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