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My Fallen Angel

Contributed by wordpoet on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I call your name in whispers, sweet passion on my lips,
Your every touch envelops me and reality痴 eclipsed.
Consumed by my desire, I need you all the more,
While every breath just fuels the fire, like nothing felt before.

As every moment passes, our two souls become one,
And I know that I値l have lost myself before the night is done.
So take me deep within you and melt away my fears,
Then tell me that you値l never go and bring my love to tears.

Should it be for just a moment, that in paradise I dwell,
I値l wait until tomorrow comes to face my private hell.
And looking back I値l know, that the love I shared is true,
Entangled in the moment that I chose to spend with you.

And now my fallen angel, no matter what the cost,
I値l spend what time I can with you, without you I am lost.
I touch you gently on the cheek, and look deep in your eyes,
While a part of me rejoices and another part it cries.

By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com




Copyright ツゥ wordpoet ... [ 2003-02-26 06:00:00]
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Re: My Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 06:57:36 AM AEST
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Doug, This is the most beautiful poem I have read of yours so far ... so filled with hope, passion, longing and fear. It flows with such passion but yet mixed with uncertainty, and then in the end your last line is just so perfect - to have it all, and yet to be sad as well ... I know just how that feels. Awesome write.... Jan


Re: My Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 08:46:20 AM AEST
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Wonderful, Each word, each line pulling me to the next. Down right beautiful poem. Thx.


Re: My Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 05:27:03 PM AEST
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Beautiful! Mixed emotions that seem so contradictory to one another... I know the feeling well. Great job!

~ Moonlit Angel


Re: My Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by S_K_Williamson on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 06:00:24 PM AEST
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So beautiful.....excellent write.
Sharon;)


Re: My Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 12:55:03 AM AEST
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WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW and i have i mentioned WOW??


Re: My Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 01:51:50 AM AEST
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Doug... Wow... The word beautiful comes to mind. I loved the last line. PM me and tell me how and if one can post poetry on your site.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: My Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 02:04:55 AM AEST
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whew, so much love, so much passion. so much beauty, honesty. this is lovely! thank you so much for sharing....
hugs,
kara


Re: My Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Pigglet on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 01:17:04 PM AEST
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well,
i dont think that I have never read a more touching poem then this one....good writing and I'm glad I had the chance to read it.

Pigglet




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