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Array ( [sid] => 13335 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Thoughts of Truth [time] => 2003-02-26 05:40:00 [hometext] => I just read a posting on the forums titled "they all know dont they" and i couldn't even really reply because it is a very touchy subject to me and this is what came from it.

Exiled [bodytext] => Thoughts of Truth

Apathy...how it walks among us
Victimizing everything we could be
Making everyone blind,
so that they can't see past there own misery.
seeing past the light of their own lives
sorrounded by the blind.
decaying with each new breath
an oderless love blends with the best
while the roses are torn apart
and condemned
for every second we live our normal lives
not searching for the truth
and ancient secret dies.
if we could only dialate the simple minds
penetrate and stop the blind
help them see the light
destroy their plastic lives.
as we lay our heads down to sleep
wondering what just
went across our minds
the night blooms as another
childs light filckers and dies. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 55 [informant] => exiled [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Thoughts of Truth

Contributed by exiled on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 05:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Thoughts of Truth

Apathy...how it walks among us
Victimizing everything we could be
Making everyone blind,
so that they can't see past there own misery.
seeing past the light of their own lives
sorrounded by the blind.
decaying with each new breath
an oderless love blends with the best
while the roses are torn apart
and condemned
for every second we live our normal lives
not searching for the truth
and ancient secret dies.
if we could only dialate the simple minds
penetrate and stop the blind
help them see the light
destroy their plastic lives.
as we lay our heads down to sleep
wondering what just
went across our minds
the night blooms as another
childs light filckers and dies.

Copyright © exiled ... [ 2003-02-26 05:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Thoughts of Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 12:07:29 PM AEST
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so much though you've put into this write. i saw the forum as well, and did leave a post. i lovve what you've said here. i definitely plan on reading more of your work.
kara

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