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You touch me not knowing the feelings I wear,
You touch me not knowing that I’m always there
You touch me and touch me and touch me again
You’re touch is the touch that’s causing me pain.

Once I found her she made me free
Said I was the man who made her be
Simple delicious ecstasy, then she died.
My women of pride.

You touch me not knowing the feelings I wear,
You touch me not knowing that I’m always there
You touch me and touch me and touch me again
You’re touch is the touch that’s causing me pain.

I never knew what she had till she flew
What is the essence of all that I knew
She is the love that could of set free
All of the prospects of what I could be.

You touch me not knowing the feelings I wear,
You touch me not knowing that I’m always there
You touch me and touch me and touch me again
You’re touch is the touch that’s causing me pain.

When it’s all over and told as the truth
This is the story of a wild and young youth.
I can’t forget all the love that I had
For the women who loved me when I was a lad. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 366 [topic] => 30 [informant] => needledancing [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )
Touch Me

Contributed by needledancing on Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 02:40:47 PM in AEST
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You touch me not knowing the feelings I wear,
You touch me not knowing that I’m always there
You touch me and touch me and touch me again
You’re touch is the touch that’s causing me pain.

Once I found her she made me free
Said I was the man who made her be
Simple delicious ecstasy, then she died.
My women of pride.

You touch me not knowing the feelings I wear,
You touch me not knowing that I’m always there
You touch me and touch me and touch me again
You’re touch is the touch that’s causing me pain.

I never knew what she had till she flew
What is the essence of all that I knew
She is the love that could of set free
All of the prospects of what I could be.

You touch me not knowing the feelings I wear,
You touch me not knowing that I’m always there
You touch me and touch me and touch me again
You’re touch is the touch that’s causing me pain.

When it’s all over and told as the truth
This is the story of a wild and young youth.
I can’t forget all the love that I had
For the women who loved me when I was a lad.




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Re: Touch Me (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 02:59:39 PM AEST
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The human touch can give us such wonderful feelings in our lives but once these touches are lost we are once again left with the feelings of loss. May you one day find the feel of peace and joy in your heart. I enjoyed the read, nicely done.


sadaddy
Scott


Re: Touch Me (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 03:29:52 PM AEST
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My friend you just wore what my heart laments on.

Thank you for sharing.

FRANCO.


Re: Touch Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 05:20:13 PM AEST
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Your writing just gets better-n-better.
Awesome work.
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Touch Me (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Saturday, 7th April 2007 @ 12:54:44 PM AEST
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this is so honest and heartfelt. nicely done.
~priss


Re: Touch Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 7th April 2007 @ 01:28:51 PM AEST
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Repetition is tricky - it's hard to pull off well, I think. It just doesn't always work. It does here though.

"You touch me"... honestly, I don't know if it's even possible to say that too many times. Love the repetition of it here, though.

~Snemmy




Re: Touch Me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 8th April 2007 @ 08:27:10 AM AEST
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Incredible, the use of you touch me worked well in this, I loved this line I never knew what she had till she flew...... Powerful

Michelle


Re: Touch Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 08:55:31 AM AEST
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excellent write:)

love n' hugs nessa




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