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You love me, you leave me, and you never believe me.
The pain of my life is a truth.
You love me, you leave, A sacrament please me.
The story of my youth...
Tortured and bounded the truth should be founded.
No witness to view my demise,
A figure of speech to the things that I’ve seen considering the youth of my size.
The hurt will be buried in all that I’ve married.
I’m trying to hide the whole truth.
Of the sins that I’ve carried,
Since first that I’ve tarried on lands of the sands of my youth.
When it’s all over the darkness I carry will actually show someone light.
For the love that you seek will never grow meek in the glow of an angel’s first night.

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Tender

Contributed by needledancing on Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 12:29:06 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

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You love me, you leave me, and you never believe me.
The pain of my life is a truth.
You love me, you leave, A sacrament please me.
The story of my youth...
Tortured and bounded the truth should be founded.
No witness to view my demise,
A figure of speech to the things that I’ve seen considering the youth of my size.
The hurt will be buried in all that I’ve married.
I’m trying to hide the whole truth.
Of the sins that I’ve carried,
Since first that I’ve tarried on lands of the sands of my youth.
When it’s all over the darkness I carry will actually show someone light.
For the love that you seek will never grow meek in the glow of an angel’s first night.

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Re: Tender (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 12:51:04 PM AEST
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My friend you have penned wonderfully the darker side of every human; there is always an untold sin that nags' every soul at a point of their life time and you have captured the mood beautifully.

An old Indian saying: " The moment we live is all that counts, the rest is all a sheer illusion."

FRANCO.

Re: Tender (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 01:01:12 PM AEST
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you are a great writer, I just can't get over reading your work, life, ideas, and sins.
you pen it down so well,
When it's all over the darkness I carry will actually show someone light, You're so right, you help me all the time.

Re: Tender (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 01:40:37 PM AEST
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Awesome writing, my friend.
huggs,
emy

Re: Tender (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:04:54 PM AEST
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You deserve it all and so shall you have it again in time, you've done nothing but redeem your self and in return so shall you be redeemed. A most ironical proclaimation of having it all and yet still having nothing. one must have them self first before they can fully appreciate another. I've gone thru this cause of past abuse in my youth, at times beleive it or not with all i have there's still the problem of the hole in one's heart that never seems to heal. A beautiful write and quite heart warming. Give it time and always know we are worth more than we give ourselves credit for. i wish you a gentle healing.

Ben

Re: Tender (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 09:08:30 AM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings....

love n' hugs nessa

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