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Now for the first time I think I've lost it all, everything that I want. I missed my chance for love. I think it's the only chance I had. I lost my only chance for your love.

I look at your heart, it looks away from me. Feeling low, the tears creeping down. It's not your fault, you can't help it, I'll still love you until I die.

Please don't feel bad, that's not what I want. All I can hope is that you'll be happy. Go out with him, anyone but me, just make sure that he will make you happy. But if he doesn't I'll always be there. Waiting my turn if you're heart changes you're mind. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 2 [informant] => nirvana12 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Love and Loneliness

Contributed by nirvana12 on Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 05:23:40 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You're beautiful, easy to see, on the inside and the outside. Stomped on my heart and you broke it, it's not your fault, I blame myself.

Now for the first time I think I've lost it all, everything that I want. I missed my chance for love. I think it's the only chance I had. I lost my only chance for your love.

I look at your heart, it looks away from me. Feeling low, the tears creeping down. It's not your fault, you can't help it, I'll still love you until I die.

Please don't feel bad, that's not what I want. All I can hope is that you'll be happy. Go out with him, anyone but me, just make sure that he will make you happy. But if he doesn't I'll always be there. Waiting my turn if you're heart changes you're mind.

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Re: Love and Loneliness (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 09:51:33 PM AEST
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Sometimes it is good to wait around for one person but sometimes it isn't good. You don't want to stop living your life because you lost your chance to go out with this person and like you said you love this person but you shouldn't wallow in your loss. Don't stop your life here and try to perserve everything by just waiting. This poem was very expressful and you can feel the love and loss in this poem. Great job.

Take care
Christina

Re: Love and Loneliness (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 01:17:15 AM AEST
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Beautifully sad.
this is a great expression of a heart that truelly loves. It's sad that she looks past you, but you noticing her happiness is what you want more than her beside you, shows your not only thinking of your feelings but a bigger picture with her in it.
Good write Nirvana12

Re: Love and Loneliness (User Rating: 1 )
by Dkanis on Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 01:59:46 AM AEST
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You pretty much wrote the same thing that I wrote in an email two nights ago. I had a poem attached the same content. So obviously I'm going to tell you I like the content. Very applicable for myself. You mind if I show her this poem, with your name attached to the bottom?

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