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In the ok

Contributed by runawaynameless on Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 01:25:37 AM in AEST
Topic: surreal



I wake from a slumber that lasted to long,
I awoke with light straight out of the sky.
I feel good seeing the brightness now all around.
I walked up to the window just to see the outside.
Why have I avoided just looking for so long?
Maybe all it takes is a day,
where you can wake up and appriciate the suns apperence.
Today has been the better of days.
Im think im going to go take a walk.




Copyright © runawaynameless ... [ 2007-04-05 01:25:37]
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Re: In the ok (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 03:41:58 AM AEST
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I am glad that sunshine gives you the comfort of security and the feeling that things will be ok. It is good when something can give you that. This was a good poem.

Take care
Christina


Re: In the ok (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 02:00:49 PM AEST
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Wow, this is a wonderful way of expressing your enlightenment of how the sunlight has awoken your soul. I hope that the sunrises bright each and everyday for you so that you may find the peace and joy that you seek in your heart young lady.


sadaddy
Scott


Re: In the ok (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 01:26:57 AM AEST
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Whatever punk when have you ever seen the sun? No, it is a very nice poem, Jess. You feeling alittle better? You're at work by this time. So I'll jus' say I'm glad you woke up to a pretty day, I hope it stay this way for you, pushing away the clouds that have been looming for the last little while.




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