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[aid] => mick
[title] => Closing the Door
[time] => 2007-04-04 08:09:54
[hometext] => this was kind of expriamental i wanted to try a structure instead of free verse with a particular rhyme scheme.
[bodytext] => I was closer to no other in an infected, rotting society we were bonded to each other but our unblemished enjoyment was a time of brevity the end was coming near because pain seemed to be pleasures brother before these months past there was a time of pure happiness when i truely believed everything would last a naive stange that had not yet befriended lonliness we were bonded us two, with a friendship so true oblivious to the fact our comraderie would be cast the piercing edge of truth wrapped me in a cacoon victiminzing myself, I rejected the lies the rolilng scrolls of falsehood crashed with a boom corrupting and consuming my realities i realized there was a lack of genuiness in our companionship what we had was ending, just as everything once dies and finally the lingering thread becomes a broken connection replaced with a true portrait of character no longer speaking to each other revealing his love in another and faithlessness to me all along death was dishonesties harboring mother consumed by the fear of being alone the most disturbing feelings are released, chilling to the bone i deprived myself from standing strong i had trusted but been let down i forgot who i was but finally i remember forever i'll be who i am now [comments] => 0 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 48 [informant] => ivoryA [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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